God Speaks
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Comment from Willie P. Smith
I love the picture. Your writing is solid, something everyone should read. Walking with God is the only way, If you plan on walking into heaven, he is the only way.
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I love the picture. Your writing is solid, something everyone should read. Walking with God is the only way, If you plan on walking into heaven, he is the only way.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2019
Comment from Diana L Crawford
This is an inspiring acrostic poem! You bring out many wonderful thought provoking ideas about what God wants from us and what a true relationship with Him is all about! I love your sense of spirituality!
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This is an inspiring acrostic poem! You bring out many wonderful thought provoking ideas about what God wants from us and what a true relationship with Him is all about! I love your sense of spirituality!
Comment Written 30-Jun-2019
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Walk With My God", is an exceptionally well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. It was a privilege to both read and review this talented poet's work. This is a true seven, but I've never been given one of them. I look forward to seeing your next post.
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"Walk With My God", is an exceptionally well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. It was a privilege to both read and review this talented poet's work. This is a true seven, but I've never been given one of them. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2019
Comment from Raul1
What God wants is for everyone to be happy and never bother anyone. I think that he is love. God is happiness and love. No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
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What God wants is for everyone to be happy and never bother anyone. I think that he is love. God is happiness and love. No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 30-Jun-2019
Comment from misscookie
Bravo
You did great for the first time they knew you had it in you
what can I say the artwork is a perfect match for you awesome poem
every word you wrote touched my heart and soul
thank you for sharing
God be with you and your
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Bravo
You did great for the first time they knew you had it in you
what can I say the artwork is a perfect match for you awesome poem
every word you wrote touched my heart and soul
thank you for sharing
God be with you and your
cookie
Comment Written 30-Jun-2019
Comment from Karen Luciana
Good Morning,
I have been reading your posts, and I think you are an excellent writer. You must be quite an observant person to be able to create such beautiful pieces. Great job on free verse acrostic. In my opinion, that is a craft which is not as easy as it seems.
Thank you for another good read.
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Good Morning,
I have been reading your posts, and I think you are an excellent writer. You must be quite an observant person to be able to create such beautiful pieces. Great job on free verse acrostic. In my opinion, that is a craft which is not as easy as it seems.
Thank you for another good read.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2019
Comment from Earl Corp
Very nice job for your first acrostic poem. What do you mean when you say "rightious livung in one life is not enough?" I would bold the words that form the acrostic part of the poem just to make it easief to read. Very nice job.
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Very nice job for your first acrostic poem. What do you mean when you say "rightious livung in one life is not enough?" I would bold the words that form the acrostic part of the poem just to make it easief to read. Very nice job.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2019
Comment from Morgan Miskolci
I, myself, am not religious but I always love to see how people capture their faith in words. But I always feel like religion and relationships with "god" are only created out of fear. Still a nice piece, thank you for sharing
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I, myself, am not religious but I always love to see how people capture their faith in words. But I always feel like religion and relationships with "god" are only created out of fear. Still a nice piece, thank you for sharing
Comment Written 30-Jun-2019
Comment from Anne B Francis
Well written words your faith is unlimited like that of a priest/clergy you have a strong believe. I trust those reading your works are blessed by there meaning.
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Well written words your faith is unlimited like that of a priest/clergy you have a strong believe. I trust those reading your works are blessed by there meaning.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2019
Comment from Badger_29
Very clear and Clarity and theme, along with the note Cube included at the bottom make this a very enjoyable acrostic. To know that it is your attempt to free verse makes it even more enjoyable as the thoughts come across clearly, however, you leave enough blue stands for the reader to wonder exactly what you mean by that I didn't leave the reader curious and wanting more knowledge about our creator. Blessings to you my fellow writer, a pleasure to fellowship with you here.
Blessings.
Darren
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Very clear and Clarity and theme, along with the note Cube included at the bottom make this a very enjoyable acrostic. To know that it is your attempt to free verse makes it even more enjoyable as the thoughts come across clearly, however, you leave enough blue stands for the reader to wonder exactly what you mean by that I didn't leave the reader curious and wanting more knowledge about our creator. Blessings to you my fellow writer, a pleasure to fellowship with you here.
Blessings.
Darren
Comment Written 13-Feb-2019
