Comment from tfawcus

Exceptional

Off to a great start in 2019. The dialogue between Veronica and James is authentic and Veronica's concerns come across strongly. A nice change of pace when the children come home. It will be fascinating to see how this plays out.

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2019

Hi Tony, Happy New Year! Thank you so much for the lovely 6 stars and review. I can't believe we are in 2019 already, so much writing to do and so much for Veronica to sort out. I'm pleased you liked this part. Big hugs!! :)) Sandra xx

Comment from Roxanna Andrews

Excellent

I saw no errors. It was very well done and I loved the interaction with the children making the shell covered pots. That is something I would do. =} We used to go to the beach when I was a kid and I loved to collect sea shells, but would always forget to take them home. ={ Well done as always. Looking forward to the next chapter. Happy New Year dear friend. Rox

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 Comment Written 01-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2019

And a Happy New Year to you, Rox! Thank you so much for the lovely review. Shell collecting was one of my favourite pastimes when I was a child, and my mother and I would make decorative pots with them. Happy days! Have a wonderful day, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx