Old Man Winter
Winter is beautiful, but it can be very harsh.47 total reviews
Comment from nancyjam
Bob, this is an absolutely beautiful free verse.
I love the personification of winter, the imagery,
alliteration, and word choice. Just such a pleasure
to read. Thanks for sharing. I loved it.
Nancy
reply by the author on 23-May-2018
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Bob, this is an absolutely beautiful free verse.
I love the personification of winter, the imagery,
alliteration, and word choice. Just such a pleasure
to read. Thanks for sharing. I loved it.
Nancy
Comment Written 23-May-2018
reply by the author on 23-May-2018
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Thank you so much, Nan. Coming from an accomplished writer like you, I am indeed honored. I am especially grateful for the six stars,my friend. .God bless you and yours.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Beautifully rendered free verse poem, Bob.
Smattered here and there with just the right amount of alliterative phrasing, the overall message here that spring is in the air is fabulously conveyed.
Bravo, Bob.
~Dean
reply by the author on 23-May-2018
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Beautifully rendered free verse poem, Bob.
Smattered here and there with just the right amount of alliterative phrasing, the overall message here that spring is in the air is fabulously conveyed.
Bravo, Bob.
~Dean
Comment Written 22-May-2018
reply by the author on 23-May-2018
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Thank you, Deano. It is a treasure indeed when you award me a six for poetry. You are one of the best poets on the site. Hope you are well (and your Dad).. Blessings and thanks again, Bob
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You're more than welcome, Bob.
I feel much the same about you and your story telling.
Dad's not doing very well and I'm spending quite a lot of time with him. In fact, I am with him now as I type this response.
He doesn't know who I am, not always. But he appreciates having someone to talk to.
Take care, my dear friend.
~Dean
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You take care too, DeanO. Bob
Comment from apky
Now I know what those stalagmites waiting to stab someone are the grand ol man's tears. But I love the powdery winter that makes everything white especially the leafless trees, and crunch satisfactorily under the boots as I sink into the mound.
Still, spring and atumn remain my favourite seasons. Winter is the untouchable beauty, worshipped from afar.
reply by the author on 23-May-2018
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Now I know what those stalagmites waiting to stab someone are the grand ol man's tears. But I love the powdery winter that makes everything white especially the leafless trees, and crunch satisfactorily under the boots as I sink into the mound.
Still, spring and atumn remain my favourite seasons. Winter is the untouchable beauty, worshipped from afar.
Comment Written 22-May-2018
reply by the author on 23-May-2018
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Thank you, Apky. I appreciate your review. Coming from atop-notch writer like you, I am indeed honored. Bob
Comment from c_lucas
This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is very good imagery and descriptive scheme. Very good job of writing.
reply by the author on 23-May-2018
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This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is very good imagery and descriptive scheme. Very good job of writing.
Comment Written 22-May-2018
reply by the author on 23-May-2018
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Thanks so much, Charlie. I miss you. :) Bob
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Thank you, Bob. I thought my surgeries were over, but they not might be.
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Wow! Ssorry about that, Charlie. Bob
Comment from w.j.debi
Excellent personification of winter as an old man and the supporting imagery with his breath, his fists, his cries and his tears that dangle like icy crystal fingers without aim. You bring him to life.
Excellent presentation which adds to the chill with its icy colors.
reply by the author on 23-May-2018
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Excellent personification of winter as an old man and the supporting imagery with his breath, his fists, his cries and his tears that dangle like icy crystal fingers without aim. You bring him to life.
Excellent presentation which adds to the chill with its icy colors.
Comment Written 22-May-2018
reply by the author on 23-May-2018
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Thanks again, Debi. the six stars are very generous of you, indeed. God Bless you and good luck continuing wwith your book. :) Bob
Comment from Sasha
I don't much care for winter, but I do miss it. The weather here is pretty much the same year round. It does cool down in the evenings but that is as close to winter as we get. Lovey work with this one. I enjoyed it very much. Did you get my PM? I found the blurb and sent it to you.
reply by the author on 22-May-2018
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I don't much care for winter, but I do miss it. The weather here is pretty much the same year round. It does cool down in the evenings but that is as close to winter as we get. Lovey work with this one. I enjoyed it very much. Did you get my PM? I found the blurb and sent it to you.
Comment Written 22-May-2018
reply by the author on 22-May-2018
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Awww. Thanks so much for yourreview and the six beautiful stars, Sasha. Yes. I did get the pm. Thanks agaain, Bob
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Bob!
Oh my goodness! This is by far one of my favorite offerings composed by your pen! And you know why! I never thought "Old Man Winter" was ever going to leave northern Michigan! (As an aside, one of my friends on facebook posted today the query, "I know it's May 22nd, but do any of you think it is too early to take my boots home from work, yet!?)
Back to your wonderful verse: It is alive with vivid personification and creative imagery I loved it!
Thank you!
diane
reply by the author on 22-May-2018
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Hello Bob!
Oh my goodness! This is by far one of my favorite offerings composed by your pen! And you know why! I never thought "Old Man Winter" was ever going to leave northern Michigan! (As an aside, one of my friends on facebook posted today the query, "I know it's May 22nd, but do any of you think it is too early to take my boots home from work, yet!?)
Back to your wonderful verse: It is alive with vivid personification and creative imagery I loved it!
Thank you!
diane
Comment Written 22-May-2018
reply by the author on 22-May-2018
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Awww. Well coming from you, Diane, I am indeed honored by this review. Bless you, my friend. :) Bob
Comment from Gloria ....
Lovely artwork choice, Bob. I must admit I'm glad winter is off the books again for at least another six months. That said, fantastic poem. Your verb and nouns just dance off the page with the blustery punch of winter.
Excellent presentation as well. A lovely image-filled poem. I always figured you were a poet. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 22-May-2018
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Lovely artwork choice, Bob. I must admit I'm glad winter is off the books again for at least another six months. That said, fantastic poem. Your verb and nouns just dance off the page with the blustery punch of winter.
Excellent presentation as well. A lovely image-filled poem. I always figured you were a poet. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 22-May-2018
reply by the author on 22-May-2018
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Thanksso much, Gloria. I always have liked to take my hand to poetry from time to time. I find it helps my novel writingbecaause of the need to use imagery constantly. My new novel Chapter one will be posted soon and then I will probably put my poetry senses away for a while. Bless you, Gloria. You are one, if not the, best poets on this site. Bob
Comment from l.raven
Hi Bob, LOL...I love Winter...but I can say...I have had enough this year...it is still cold here at nights...and just getting in the 60's in the days...I am ready for Spring...I love your poem my sweet friend...and your colors and picture are beautiful...so very well written you...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 22-May-2018
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Hi Bob, LOL...I love Winter...but I can say...I have had enough this year...it is still cold here at nights...and just getting in the 60's in the days...I am ready for Spring...I love your poem my sweet friend...and your colors and picture are beautiful...so very well written you...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 22-May-2018
reply by the author on 22-May-2018
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Thanks so much, Linda. You are a real sweetheart an dI appreciate you always. :) Bob
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I appreciate your poetry Bob...I love reading it...thank you...and you are soooo welcome...always...smiling back at ya...love xxoo
Comment from johnwilson
This is different, of course, but equally as beautiful and haunting as the rest of your work. I'm looking forward to an autographed copy of your book coming out in September, about all the chapters I read early about the abused family. If this isn't it, it's OK. I want to read whatever novel you write!
reply by the author on 22-May-2018
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This is different, of course, but equally as beautiful and haunting as the rest of your work. I'm looking forward to an autographed copy of your book coming out in September, about all the chapters I read early about the abused family. If this isn't it, it's OK. I want to read whatever novel you write!
Comment Written 22-May-2018
reply by the author on 22-May-2018
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Well, thank you kind sir. I am honored by your review and compliments. I will keep you in mind when the book is released for sure. Bless you, my friend. Bob