The Moth
A poem in ballad measure59 total reviews
Comment from Irish Rain
How beautiful Mr. Tony. I love the 'eyes'...that's a safety measure for moths, isn't it? I'd be leaving that window shut...moths freak me out. I love butterflies, so I don't know why this is. Just lovely, blessings...
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2017
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How beautiful Mr. Tony. I love the 'eyes'...that's a safety measure for moths, isn't it? I'd be leaving that window shut...moths freak me out. I love butterflies, so I don't know why this is. Just lovely, blessings...
Comment Written 01-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2017
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Yes - I think you're right about the eyes. Nature has some beautiful defences! I've always rather liked moths - except those little perishers that get into the pantry and into clothing! Thanks for dropping in to review. Best wishes, Tony
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You're most welcome!!
Comment from Mastery
Simply outstanding, Tony. I like this one from start to finish. especially here:
"and let this dreamer flutter in
to touch reality,
the flame that burns, reducing all
to grey eternity,"
Blessings, my friend. Bob
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2017
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Simply outstanding, Tony. I like this one from start to finish. especially here:
"and let this dreamer flutter in
to touch reality,
the flame that burns, reducing all
to grey eternity,"
Blessings, my friend. Bob
Comment Written 01-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2017
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I always appreciate your reviews, Bob. Thank you for dropping by. I appreciate the six stars - most affirming! Best wishes, Tony
Comment from RGstar
A nice write, Tony. Feather-like touches with good alliteration.
I wonder what influenced this write, was it a moment in thought or the image?
Beautiful it is.
My best wishes.
RG
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2017
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A nice write, Tony. Feather-like touches with good alliteration.
I wonder what influenced this write, was it a moment in thought or the image?
Beautiful it is.
My best wishes.
RG
Comment Written 01-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2017
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Very many thanks, RG. It is always good to hear from you and your words mean a great deal. The poem came first here, although I did have this particular kind of moth in mind - they are common here and at certain times of the year two or three may be seen clinging the the window pane of a room where a light has been left on. I had to track down the image on Google.
Comment from strandregs
Hi Tony
like it alot. You captured the moth fluffingly fantastic.
I like all the stanzas.
your right to free flow
prisoned thoughts is justified.:-)) Z.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2017
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Hi Tony
like it alot. You captured the moth fluffingly fantastic.
I like all the stanzas.
your right to free flow
prisoned thoughts is justified.:-)) Z.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2017
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Thanks, Z. Your comments are worth a king's ransom, but sadly there are moths in my wallet.
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hi Tony. I must say this has a wonderful measure to it. The story telling had me watching and waiting on what you would do. It is a solid write using a great imagination to tell the tale. Personally, I would have liked to see the moth fly out the window. Well done you. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2017
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Hi Tony. I must say this has a wonderful measure to it. The story telling had me watching and waiting on what you would do. It is a solid write using a great imagination to tell the tale. Personally, I would have liked to see the moth fly out the window. Well done you. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 01-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2017
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Thank you for your comments, Kiwi. Much appreciated! Tony
Comment from Ella25
The poem is such a pleasure to read, exquisitely written. Great rhyming and flow to it. The image speaks for itself. Superb. I wish I could give six. With love, Ella
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2017
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The poem is such a pleasure to read, exquisitely written. Great rhyming and flow to it. The image speaks for itself. Superb. I wish I could give six. With love, Ella
Comment Written 01-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2017
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Always good to hear from you, Ella. I do appreciate your comments and thank you for the suggestion of six-worthiness! Best wishes, Tony
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You are welcome. All the best. Ella
Comment from dragonpoet
Could this moth be spying on you with those eyes? You never know.
This poem flows well and shows how much nature inspires us. It also shows you keep this moth alive by not opening the window to let it come to the candle it is probably lured to.
I like the personification of the moth.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2017
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Could this moth be spying on you with those eyes? You never know.
This poem flows well and shows how much nature inspires us. It also shows you keep this moth alive by not opening the window to let it come to the candle it is probably lured to.
I like the personification of the moth.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 01-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2017
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Thanks so much for this review, DP. I was delighted that you picked up on the metaphoric nature of the moth and its parallel - the poet! Few did! I always appreciate you dropping by. Best wishes, Tony
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Any time, Tony.
Joan
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Your poem is such a joy to read, so well written with great rhyming and flow and scored no less than a six for me, just perfect, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2017
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Your poem is such a joy to read, so well written with great rhyming and flow and scored no less than a six for me, just perfect, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2017
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What an uplifting review, Dolly! Six stars, too! You have made my day. Best wishes, Tony
Comment from zanya
A reflective poetic tribute to this beautiful creature - the moth- not often the subject of poetry -a sense of reflection enhanced by the enjambment
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2017
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A reflective poetic tribute to this beautiful creature - the moth- not often the subject of poetry -a sense of reflection enhanced by the enjambment
Comment Written 01-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2017
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Very many thanks for your kind words about my poem, Zanya. Much appreciated! Best wishes, Tony
Comment from Bill O'Bier
Hello Tony:
I thought your poem was wonderful as always. I just can't help but take a moment to tell you that I once watched a moth come out of its cocoon. It still had its wings crumpled up, and it was just starting to pump its wings up. Life continues in lots of places and is a magical thing. Thanks so much for sharing this piece.
Bill~
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2017
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Hello Tony:
I thought your poem was wonderful as always. I just can't help but take a moment to tell you that I once watched a moth come out of its cocoon. It still had its wings crumpled up, and it was just starting to pump its wings up. Life continues in lots of places and is a magical thing. Thanks so much for sharing this piece.
Bill~
Comment Written 01-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2017
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Very many thanks for your kind words about my poem, Bill. Much appreciated, as was your comment about the emerging moth! Best wishes, Tony