Comment from WalkerMan

Excellent

This is an excellently constructed Palindrome with smoothly flowing wording that does not seem at all forced to fit. I like "Colors abounding, dreamflowers growing." I like the illustration too (though I must gently tease you and say that these "children" dreaming must be mostly not-so-young boys). Well done.

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2017

lol I never thought of that when I chose the artwork.

Thanks, WalkerMan, for your kind and amusing review. I appreciate your attention to my work.

Always,

Luna

reply by WalkerMan on 06-Jan-2017

You are welcome, Jeni. I'm glad my review amused you. :)) -- Mike

Comment from winnona

Exceptional

This poem is beautiful. The well-chosen words flowed well line to line combining and forming the message of the poem for the reader. The words created the images of the mythical beings in the dreams. The artwork and background color completed the piece well.

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2017

Goodness, winnona, a six-star review! I'm totally thrilled and thankful you thought this worthy of that sixth star.

I enjoyed reading your review, and thank you for your attention to my work.

Thank you once again for the exceptional review! I'm truly honored.

Love,

Jeni

Comment from Lu Saluna

Excellent

This is very, good. It is mystica and enchanting. Whichever one you read, though it reads differently, the meaning is not lost. It is still an enchanting poem. One that is full of imagination, vivid imagery and the kind of joy that children are all about.

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2017

Dear Lu, I thank you for reading and reviewing this poem. Your words are both kind and complimentary. I appreciate your attention to my work.

Love,

Jeni

Comment from GWinterwin

Excellent

Good picture and words that tell of the beautiful dreams of children. Would be nice if all their dreams were this good. Good job, thanks for sharing, keep up the good work.

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2017

Thank you for choosing to read and review this poem. I appreciate your kind words.

Yours,

Luna

Comment from Badger_29

Excellent

A wonderfully crowded dreamscape. I really liked the image, and the background and font colors were also very effective in the fanciful presentation.
The
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In the middle a perfect split, allows the reader to take a breath before the breath taking ending. I enjoyed this voyage, and will also enjoy a full canvas tonight in MY dreams
Thanks for sharing,
Brother Badger

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2017

Dear Badger

First, thank you for choosing to read and review my poem. Your review was a treat to read, for it made me feel like I had accomplished what I had been trying to do.

Thank you for your kindness and your continued attention to my work.

Yours,

Jeni

Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)

Excellent

This is a very well done palindrome, my friend. Trying to write these gives me a migraine. You make it look easy, but I know they are not. Take care~Debbie

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2017

Dear Debbie,

Thanks for choosing to read and review this poem. Actually, I enjoy writing palindromes and this one was the most fun to write of all I have written so far.

I bet you could do it, my friend.

Love,

Jeni

Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

A poem that is full of imagery that displays true imagination. The artwork complements your poem perfectly. The poem reads smoothly and does not seem forced.

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2017

Thank you for choosing to read my work and leaving this kind review. I'm happy that the poem did not seem forced to you.

Always,

Luna

Comment from Gert sherwood

Exceptional

Hello Luna ,
I enjoyed your Dream play poem Is excellent forward and backwards and your line
mother moon heeds life dream:

here is my vision I would like to have in a dream


where the Mother Moon beams, The fairies go winging

Fairies go winging where the Mother Moon beams

Gert

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2017

Dear Gert,

I'm extremely excited and thankful for this lovely six-star review. I certainly was not expecting it, and you have honored me. I thank you.

I'm happy that you enjoyed my poem and that you shared your vision of a dream with me.

Good to see you again, Gert.

Love,

Luna

reply by Gert sherwood on 06-Jan-2017

You are so welcome Luna
Please take care
Gert

Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

This is the exact opposite of the dreams that Dean Kuch has. He dreams of the same creatures, but they all turn into monsters.

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2017

Yep, the exact opposite of Dean's. I sometimes have dreams similar to Dean's, but this was a good one.

I'm happy you decided to read the poem and leave me this review.

Yours,

Luna

Comment from Irish Rain

Excellent

I love the Palindrome style. the first one I wrote, I thought 'never again!'...But...like a jigsaw puzzle...can't pass them up! This is most excellent! Blessings...

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2017

Hey, Irish Rain, how are you?

Yep, I am drawn to palindromes as well. This one was the most fun to compose out of all of them I've written thus far.

I'm happy you enjoyed it. Thanks for letting me know.

Yours,

Luna