Falling Off The Edge
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Comment from TallySally
Ulla - I like your story - sometimes fiction sounds dry but this has fine realism. It is also exciting. I suppose most people have dreamed of an unexpected inheritance - even joked about it. So there is that for excitement. Also, personally, I envy your travel and knowledge of various countries. I appreciate your sharing your travels and your personal life.
I look forward to the next installment.
God bless and my best,
Relda
reply by the author on 05-May-2016
Ulla - I like your story - sometimes fiction sounds dry but this has fine realism. It is also exciting. I suppose most people have dreamed of an unexpected inheritance - even joked about it. So there is that for excitement. Also, personally, I envy your travel and knowledge of various countries. I appreciate your sharing your travels and your personal life.
I look forward to the next installment.
God bless and my best,
Relda
Comment Written 30-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 05-May-2016
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Hi Relda, thanks a lot for this heartfelt review. It's very much appreciated. I'm sorry I'm late in answering. Catching up as best as I can. All the best. Ulla:))
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Hey - I'm right in there with you about the 'time' issue! Hope things settle down for you some. - Relda
Comment from JTStone
I got busy with work and I've been catching up on all my favorite stories this past week. Good to see you waited for me to come back, I didn't miss a minute of this one.
It was a whirl wind day in Denmark and then hurry back to a stale relationship--kind of a let down. At least the wine and the conversation with your aunt were both good...
Jimmy
reply by the author on 05-May-2016
I got busy with work and I've been catching up on all my favorite stories this past week. Good to see you waited for me to come back, I didn't miss a minute of this one.
It was a whirl wind day in Denmark and then hurry back to a stale relationship--kind of a let down. At least the wine and the conversation with your aunt were both good...
Jimmy
Comment Written 30-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 05-May-2016
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Thank a lot Jimmy. Yes it was a hectic day to say the least. But it was great to speak to my aunt. She instigated it all after all. Sorry for my late review. I'm catching up. All the best. Ulla:)
Comment from creativepenname
Wow, this story chapter is very well written. It's not too long or too short which is nice. I couldn't spot anything that needs editing either. The story itself is quite interesting. Thank you for sharing and I hope to read more of your work!
reply by the author on 05-May-2016
Wow, this story chapter is very well written. It's not too long or too short which is nice. I couldn't spot anything that needs editing either. The story itself is quite interesting. Thank you for sharing and I hope to read more of your work!
Comment Written 30-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 05-May-2016
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Thank you so very much for this great review. Much appreciated. Glad you liked it. All the best. Ulla:)
Comment from TheresaWilliams
Excellent! I can't wait to go back and read what came first! The dialogue was fantastic, as it tells me a bit about the personality of the speaker. The story line is a good one, and it makes the reader want to read more. Very good piece!
reply by the author on 01-May-2016
Excellent! I can't wait to go back and read what came first! The dialogue was fantastic, as it tells me a bit about the personality of the speaker. The story line is a good one, and it makes the reader want to read more. Very good piece!
Comment Written 30-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 01-May-2016
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Thank you so much, Theresa. I do hope that you can find the time to read previous chapters. I know they don't pay anymore. I'm so glad you liked it. Al the best. Ulla:))
Comment from Jonadab Ezerie
Will there be a part 8? GREAT.Unique author and great writing skills.The storyline was excellent and hope to review more of your great works.
reply by the author on 01-May-2016
Will there be a part 8? GREAT.Unique author and great writing skills.The storyline was excellent and hope to review more of your great works.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 01-May-2016
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Thank you very much. Oh yes, there will be a part eight. The end of the story I think. All the best. Ulla:)
Comment from Helen Bach
This is a fascinating story Ulla and I'm hooked. Goethe sounds a wonderful character. These little titbits really keep my interest. I look forward to the next instalment. Unfortunately I have no sixes left but I would give you one as there are few that have captured me as you have. X
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reply by the author on 01-May-2016
This is a fascinating story Ulla and I'm hooked. Goethe sounds a wonderful character. These little titbits really keep my interest. I look forward to the next instalment. Unfortunately I have no sixes left but I would give you one as there are few that have captured me as you have. X
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Comment Written 30-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 01-May-2016
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Aww, Helen , thank you so very much. You can't imagine how pleased I am that you enjoy it so much. All the best. Ulla xx
Comment from Douglas Paul
I continue to enjoy your story, Ulla. I like the developments in this chapter and I see no errors. I also like the way you ended this with anticipation of her return to Denmark
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reply by the author on 05-May-2016
I continue to enjoy your story, Ulla. I like the developments in this chapter and I see no errors. I also like the way you ended this with anticipation of her return to Denmark
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Comment Written 30-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 05-May-2016
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Thanks a lot for the great review. I really do appreciate it. All the best. Ulla:)