Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Just a little more exercising of a few more facial muscles, that's all it costs.
You know, they used to believe it took more muscles in your face to frown than to smile, but that's been dis-proven recently. It takes 13 more muscles to smile than to frown.
So, having said that, it takes more work to smile, but anything worth having is worth working for.

Well done.
Best of luck to you in the contest.

~Dean

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 Comment Written 20-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016

Hi Dean. Thank so much for reading and giving this feedback. Yes a smile is worth the work and good facial exercise to boot. Thanks for the best of luck wishes

reply by Dean Kuch on 20-Apr-2016

My pleasure, anytime. :)

Comment from PoemsOfDD

Excellent

I love the picture!! That in itself put a smile on my face. This is a very good entry for the Seven Word Poem contest. In a limited number of words you have stated an important point. Very well done and best of luck in the competition. ~DD

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 Comment Written 20-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016

Hi DD, These seven words just popped into my head as I walked passed a stranger today and we both smiled so here it is. I think it does make one feel good though Thanks so much for your review and best of luck wishes

reply by PoemsOfDD on 20-Apr-2016

For a giggles (or maybe you won't) read my piece on ~ A Strager Approaches ~ It's so easy to smile but sometimes it's like getting blood out of a stone. My write was after a walk to the park. ~DD

reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016

Ok I will Cheers