Comment from Helen Bach

Excellent

Great stuff Ulla, again I'm with you every step of the way. I look forward to your notifications. You are an able writer with a talent for the cliff hanger ending. Your story is quite fascinating. If I have sixes they're yours. It will have to be a virtual one today. X

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2016

Hi Hellen, what a great review, and very pleased with your virtual six. I'm thrilled that you like my writing. All the best. Ulla xx

Comment from jusylee72

Excellent

Interesting story. Well told. I am interested in getting to know what else is happening here. Thank you and continue writing this. I will try to keep track of it as you go along.

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2016

Hi Jusylee, Thanks a lot for the great review. I'm so happy that you liked it and trying to follow it. All the best. Ulla :))

Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

I guess the first step is finding a lawyer willing to take time to talk with you, as they usually only work on their own schedules, if at all. Thanks for another fine chapter. :-)

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2016

Thanks a lot Ric, I know I was privileged there, had a few connections to draw on. So pleased that you are following this. All the best. Ulla :)

Comment from Bryana

Excellent

Dear Ulla, I can't wait! This is so exciting.
Don't make us wait too long girl. The past
meetings were wonderful, I'm sure this one
is going to be the same.

Un abrazo para ti.

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2016

Hola Bryana, thanks you so much. I'm thrilled you like it. My family from Denmark is here in Spain at the moment so very busy with my grandchildren. Two small girls. Un abrazo para ti. Ulla:))

Comment from nancy_e_davis

Excellent

You are doing a good job, you seem to have
handed your anxiety off to me and now My
stomach is doing flip-flops hoping everything
goes well for you. LOL Will you make the flight
in good time. Fingers crossed. Nancy

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2016

Hello Nancy, thanks a lot for this wonderful review. I'm sorry to keep you in suspense,but a hectic day it sure was. All the best. Ulla:))

Comment from aryr

Excellent

First I will admit that I have not yet read parts 1-4; but shall do so before the day is over. However part 5 presents intrigue, mystery, suspense, adventure and a sense of generosity from strangers. Your writing gives hope to mankind that at a time of need, people will assist. It also gives a sense of determination and a refusal to be defeated. I certainly enjoyed this and look forward to the next part. It flows well, the dialogue is very realistic. A good writing, thank you.

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2016

Thank you so much for your great review. If you were to take time to read previous chapters I would of course be very pleased. I'm glad you like this. All the best. Ulla:))

reply by aryr on 03-Apr-2016

welcome.

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Ulla,

I can't wait to see what happens -- HURRY!

Some notes:
1.) breath didn't do anything to (alleviate) the fluttering of my heart.

2.) It felt like a butterfly had been set (loose).

3.) to me by High Court Judge Otto such and such." I paused
--> 'such and such'?

Very interesting!

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2016

Hi Robyn, thanks a lot for the great review, and I have corrected. I won't come with excuses but it's beyond me I don't see when editing. All the best. Ulla:)))

Comment from Douglas Paul

Excellent

Your writing is clear and fluid as always. I see no errors. The story moves along at a pleasing pace. You left cme urious about what will come of this meeting. Well done, Ulla

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2016

Thank you so much for this great review. Much appreciated. All the best. Ulla

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi Ulla,

A short little instalment this time, providing a good link from the eligibility to the lawyer.

anything to allivate - alleviate.

butterfly had been set lose - loose.

I paused fearing the worsed - worst.

All the best
G

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2016

Hi G, thanks a lot for this. Sorry to be so late, but my family has been down from Denmark, so been very busy with my two small granddaughters. All the best. Ulla

Comment from F. Wehr3

Excellent

A good continuation to the story. i will be eager to see how it turns out. I found one thing for your consideration.

"Can I speak to Mrs Faber please," I said ' I would suggest a question mark instead of a comma and change said to ask.

Take care,
Russell

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 Comment Written 01-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2016

Thank you so much for the great review. All the best. Ulla