Comment from Ben Colder

Excellent

I never found any typos or stanza mistakes but became puzzled somewhere between wondering if this was a story poem. Anyway, thank you for sharing.

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 Comment Written 16-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2016

Hi Ben, Thank you for stopping by to read my poem which tells the story in a free verse style of poetry, I usuallly do rhyming poems, bit I thought my story was better suited to a free style with no rhyming restrictions. Many Cheers Christine 😃