2015 Haiku
Viewing comments for Chapter 26 "haiku (cut down trees)"A collection of haiku I wrote in 2015
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Comment from honeytree
Excellent art work in everyway
Trees are so important for our environment
why cut them down and the beauty the trees
share with us can never be replaced.
Honey tree.
I have no six
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2015
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Excellent art work in everyway
Trees are so important for our environment
why cut them down and the beauty the trees
share with us can never be replaced.
Honey tree.
I have no six
Comment Written 14-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2015
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Thank you very much for the review and feedback. I appreciate you taking the time. to read my haiku. :)
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liked what you wrote
Annie
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I liked what you wrote
Annie
Comment from fafa
I do not like the haikus, but this one has thesense of the nature, of its care of beingable to choose the ways and to feel pleasedby it, greetings
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2015
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I do not like the haikus, but this one has thesense of the nature, of its care of beingable to choose the ways and to feel pleasedby it, greetings
Comment Written 14-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2015
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Thank you very much for the review and feedback. I appreciate you taking the time. to read my haiku. :)
Comment from RGstar
So right. We seem to want to destroy all, regardless of the importance to so many living things.
I wonder if we will ever learn.
Best wishes,
Rgstaaar
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2015
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So right. We seem to want to destroy all, regardless of the importance to so many living things.
I wonder if we will ever learn.
Best wishes,
Rgstaaar
Comment Written 14-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2015
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Thank you very much for the review and feedback. I appreciate you taking the time. to read my haiku. :)
Comment from Leineco
Love the haiku - (great satori with the dual "breathtaking" word play)
But the IMAGE!!! That's killer! Do you know if it is real or photoshopped? Can you imagine looking out your kitchen window every day and looking at that pair of lungs image!!!
Good luck in the contest :-)
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2015
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Love the haiku - (great satori with the dual "breathtaking" word play)
But the IMAGE!!! That's killer! Do you know if it is real or photoshopped? Can you imagine looking out your kitchen window every day and looking at that pair of lungs image!!!
Good luck in the contest :-)
Comment Written 14-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2015
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Thank you very much for the review and feedback. I appreciate you taking the time. to read my haiku. :)
Comment from Irish Goat
Disturbing little death haiku on deforestation. Contemporary construction with the under seventeen syllable short-long-short model. Reads well, with good thesis and follow through
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2015
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Disturbing little death haiku on deforestation. Contemporary construction with the under seventeen syllable short-long-short model. Reads well, with good thesis and follow through
Comment Written 14-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2015
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Thank you very much for the review and feedback. I appreciate you taking the time. to read my haiku. :)
Comment from ericawrites
Well done to you, this is a really good Haiku and a wonderful response to the writing prompt, with perfect syllable count.
The picture complements it perfectly. The two swathes of forest remind me of two lungs.
Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2015
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Well done to you, this is a really good Haiku and a wonderful response to the writing prompt, with perfect syllable count.
The picture complements it perfectly. The two swathes of forest remind me of two lungs.
Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2015
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Thank you very much for the review and feedback. I appreciate you taking the time. to read my haiku. :)
Comment from Louise Michelle
What a marvelous play with words. It's not always easy for me to leave comments on these short, shorts, but I was struck with how much meaning you put into your well selected words. Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2015
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What a marvelous play with words. It's not always easy for me to leave comments on these short, shorts, but I was struck with how much meaning you put into your well selected words. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 14-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2015
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Thank you very much for the review and feedback. I appreciate you taking the time. to read my haiku. :)
Comment from Unspoken94
The picture couldn't be more appropriate.
It is a nightmarish picture of our disregard
for not just the life of the trees but also for
all the animals dwelling there.
An excellent entry. I will be voting. -Bill
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2015
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The picture couldn't be more appropriate.
It is a nightmarish picture of our disregard
for not just the life of the trees but also for
all the animals dwelling there.
An excellent entry. I will be voting. -Bill
Comment Written 14-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2015
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Thank you very much for the review and feedback. I appreciate you taking the time. to read my haiku. :) Thank you for voting, not enough writers do.
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No, not enough do and that's why I am moving away from contests.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello author
You didn't need your photo your haiku drew a very clear picture with I see as your satori line-
that won't help you breathe anymore with your very concrete lines
Gert
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2015
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Hello author
You didn't need your photo your haiku drew a very clear picture with I see as your satori line-
that won't help you breathe anymore with your very concrete lines
Gert
Comment Written 14-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2015
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Thank you very much for the review and feedback. I appreciate you taking the time. to read my haiku. :)
Comment from happykat4
This is a fine haiku. It stands on its own, and the ah-ha moment in your last line is wonderful. I must say the artwork also compliments the work and reflects the cut trees but more than that, it looks like part of the lung. The imagery is excellent. Best of luck in the contest looks like a winner to me.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2015
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This is a fine haiku. It stands on its own, and the ah-ha moment in your last line is wonderful. I must say the artwork also compliments the work and reflects the cut trees but more than that, it looks like part of the lung. The imagery is excellent. Best of luck in the contest looks like a winner to me.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2015
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Thank you very much for the review and feedback. I appreciate you taking the time. to read my haiku. :)