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Get Well, Brooke!

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Writing for Brooke

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Comment from Bill Schott
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This is yet another great tribute to a person who has garnered more adoration than she had probably imagined. This and the other poems will keep her busy reading.

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 05-Jun-2015
    Thank you very much
Comment from Tomes Johnston
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This is a beautiful poem that the author has created with this piece of writing. This is a great tribute to a fellow FanStorian here. We all hope and pray that Brooke gets well soon. Well done.

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 05-Jun-2015
    thank you very much.
reply by Tomes Johnston on 05-Jun-2015
    My pleasure
Comment from l.raven
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HI Sanka, truly one of the best I have read...and they have all been wonderful...I know she will love this poem...every word wonderful...so nicely written...Luff Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 05-Jun-2015
    Thank you very much I hope these poems would be sent to brooke and she can read them.
reply by l.raven on 05-Jun-2015
    I'm sure Miranda will see she gets them...she is really a wonderful daughter ...you are so very welcome...xxoo
Comment from TomyKan
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A beautiful tribute to Brooke, who obviously is so loved by Fan Story people. Your poem is well done, with good rhythm, rhyme and flow. I'm sure Brooke will love it. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 05-Jun-2015
    Thank you very much.
Comment from ameen786
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This is a masterpiece of a poem; my friend, outstanding job and a superb tribute to the Queen of hearts; each verse is skilfully crafted in lovey rhymes.

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 05-Jun-2015
    Thank you very much,ameen for these brilliant stars. your words have made me very happy.
Comment from watergirl
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HI I am all out of sixes but wow this is a beautiful poem and does justice to the beautiful Brooke. Your deep feelings and respect are clearly evident, and it is woven together in a flowing lovely fashion. A poem she would be proud of. Great.

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 05-Jun-2015
    Thank you very much
Comment from manders
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I have not been active on here for years and finally decided to come back. This is a beautiful poem and tribute. The wording and imagery is wonderful, I look forward to reading more by you and Brooke. The lines are near as even as they come and the rhyming is wonderful.
Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 05-Jun-2015
    Thank you very much for these lovely stars once again.
Comment from Curly Girly
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This poem serves as a lovely tribute to Brooke, Adewpearl.
Your choice of title was a thoughtful one too. it seems to personalise it. I am sure Brooke will be thrilled to read your poem and good wishes.

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 05-Jun-2015
    Thank you very much for your lovely review.
Comment from Neonewman
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A dew and a pearl,
I immediately thought of Brooke as is scanned this title. What a wonderfully crafted piece you have offered up for such an awesome poet.
God bless!
Steve

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 05-Jun-2015
    Thank you very muchand God bless my friend.
Comment from mermaids
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Your poetic form captures clearly the essence of Brooke's poetry. Nature and her impact are common themes and your words describe well the dandelions, daffodils, bees and all the other beauty of nature that Brooke writes about. I wish her a speedy recovery.

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 05-Jun-2015
    Thank you very much.