Tiny Terrors
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "The Abandoned"A collection of short horror fiction
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Comment from Tomes Johnston
This is yet another chilling tale that the author has created with this piece of work. There were plenty of old buildings like this when I was growing up too and lots of tales to go with them.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2015
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This is yet another chilling tale that the author has created with this piece of work. There were plenty of old buildings like this when I was growing up too and lots of tales to go with them.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2015
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Thank you for your interest in this series of tiny, twisted, terror tales of flash fiction. I truly appreciate your feedback. :)
~Dean
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I love reading them.
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Hopefully more is on the way soon. Thanks again. :)
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Oh yes, I remember but I can't access the audio and video on my computer. What was it? Intersanctom? I
ll tell you one thing. Someone comes running at me with a pitchfork I'd never go near the barn again. Especially if it had a scarecrow that looked like the one in the picture. LOL Good job. Nancy
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2015
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Oh yes, I remember but I can't access the audio and video on my computer. What was it? Intersanctom? I
ll tell you one thing. Someone comes running at me with a pitchfork I'd never go near the barn again. Especially if it had a scarecrow that looked like the one in the picture. LOL Good job. Nancy
Comment Written 13-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2015
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Thank you for your interest in this series of tiny, twisted, terror tales of flash fiction. I truly appreciate your feedback. :)
~Dean
Comment from ravenblack
And no doubt some of those scarecrows go by the name of Malachi. Any Ray Bolgers dancing around singing " I wish I had a brain" need not apply. Unless they are willing to pitchfork one out.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2015
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And no doubt some of those scarecrows go by the name of Malachi. Any Ray Bolgers dancing around singing " I wish I had a brain" need not apply. Unless they are willing to pitchfork one out.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2015
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Thank you for your interest in this series of tiny, twisted, terror tales of flash fiction. I truly appreciate your feedback. :)
~Dean
Comment from Linda Engel
Where do you find the horrible (so cool) gruesome (oh so cool) pictures to go along with your tiny stories. Another great lets- just- scare-the-crap-out-of-the-kids story. Kids? hell, what about us grown-ups. You are so ...Oh... (I have to go hide now. I hear THEM coming)
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2015
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Where do you find the horrible (so cool) gruesome (oh so cool) pictures to go along with your tiny stories. Another great lets- just- scare-the-crap-out-of-the-kids story. Kids? hell, what about us grown-ups. You are so ...Oh... (I have to go hide now. I hear THEM coming)
Comment Written 13-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2015
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Hello, Linda Thank you for your interest in this series of tiny, twisted, terror tales of flash fiction. I truly appreciate your feedback. :)
~Dean
Comment from kiwijenny
He he he after the scare crows have turned....
Yikes what into ? I think perhaps into care crones...bossy old nurses who jab every body with hyperdermic needles and give everybody spit baths...you know the kind mothers give with a finger in your ear and spittle on her finger,...that is the scariest
Lol
God bless
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2015
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He he he after the scare crows have turned....
Yikes what into ? I think perhaps into care crones...bossy old nurses who jab every body with hyperdermic needles and give everybody spit baths...you know the kind mothers give with a finger in your ear and spittle on her finger,...that is the scariest
Lol
God bless
Comment Written 13-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2015
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Hey, jenny. Thank you for your interest in this series of tiny, twisted, terror tales of flash fiction. I truly appreciate your feedback. :)
~Dean
Comment from Drew Delaney
Scary stuff, Dean. You have a gift for writing these kind of stories. I guess we write what we are comfortable with. Nice work. Drew
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2015
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Scary stuff, Dean. You have a gift for writing these kind of stories. I guess we write what we are comfortable with. Nice work. Drew
Comment Written 13-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2015
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Thank you for your interest in this series of tiny, twisted, terror tales of flash fiction, Drew. I truly appreciate your feedback. :)
~Dean
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Kids will be kids-Right! Thank goodness some of them heeded the warning.
They say the walls have ears but this evil barn image appears to have eyes.(look closely)
After they've turned? into what? skeleton sticks. Lol.
I know it is meant to be evil, and it does put a whole new meaning to the saying, "go bag your head," but it just fizzled out for me. No lost souls, sadistic screams, missing kids.
Sorry Dean.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2015
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Kids will be kids-Right! Thank goodness some of them heeded the warning.
They say the walls have ears but this evil barn image appears to have eyes.(look closely)
After they've turned? into what? skeleton sticks. Lol.
I know it is meant to be evil, and it does put a whole new meaning to the saying, "go bag your head," but it just fizzled out for me. No lost souls, sadistic screams, missing kids.
Sorry Dean.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2015
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Thank you for your continued interest in this series of tiny, twisted, terror tales of flash fiction, Shirley . I truly appreciate your excellent feedback. :)
~Dean
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
This is going to be one really hellish book of Tiny Terror Tales, Dean, especially with the creepy pictures you put with them! I think most of us have had that, 'barn' or similar as children. Ours was an old Rectory, which had been abandoned almost a century ago. There were many stories surrounding it which kept the children well away from it. Another wonderful, Dean, story! xsx Sandra.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2015
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This is going to be one really hellish book of Tiny Terror Tales, Dean, especially with the creepy pictures you put with them! I think most of us have had that, 'barn' or similar as children. Ours was an old Rectory, which had been abandoned almost a century ago. There were many stories surrounding it which kept the children well away from it. Another wonderful, Dean, story! xsx Sandra.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2015
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Hey, Sandra.
Thanks for your continued interest in this series of tiny, twisted, terror tales of flash fiction. I truly appreciate your feedback. :)
~Dean
Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT
You are a purveyor of terror my man I love how you can use so few words and yet get ones skin to crawl..A master of the dark side you are!!
tk
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2015
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You are a purveyor of terror my man I love how you can use so few words and yet get ones skin to crawl..A master of the dark side you are!!
tk
Comment Written 13-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2015
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Hey, much obliged for the six stars and your interest in this series of tiny, twisted, terror tales of flash fiction, TK. I truly appreciate your feedback and most generous rating. :)
~Dean
Comment from Spiritual Echo
You have such an amazing library of stories in your mind. This one is just plain funny to me. I'm so glad as I always hesitate opening your stories before bedtime. Thanks for the laugh.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2015
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You have such an amazing library of stories in your mind. This one is just plain funny to me. I'm so glad as I always hesitate opening your stories before bedtime. Thanks for the laugh.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2015
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Hello, Ingrid...
Thank you for your interest in this series of tiny, twisted, terror tales of flash fiction. I truly appreciate your feedback, it is invaluable to me. :)
~Dean