Reflections Of Color
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Comment from TAB_that's me
I thought this started off really interesting but got lost somewhere along the way - going from the pains of growing up (so true) and lessons learned to someone going away and this part got a bit repetitive being repeating too many times.
Teresa
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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2015
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I thought this started off really interesting but got lost somewhere along the way - going from the pains of growing up (so true) and lessons learned to someone going away and this part got a bit repetitive being repeating too many times.
Teresa
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Comment Written 07-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2015
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Sorry you did not get the meaning of this poem. But, hey, thanks for reading it any way.
Comment from thomdble
I ran out of sixes!! Fantastic stuff.
The board of education needs to be applied to our nation as one big family.
For or against corporal punishment, It is needed, badly, sadly that is a sure fired way to learn between good and bad
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2015
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I ran out of sixes!! Fantastic stuff.
The board of education needs to be applied to our nation as one big family.
For or against corporal punishment, It is needed, badly, sadly that is a sure fired way to learn between good and bad
Comment Written 07-Apr-2015
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Thanks for your comments. Appreciate them.
Comment from MizKat
Hi Brett,
Your poem is written really well and the rhyming in it is wonderful. It tells a great story about growing up although it also made me sad. I had a dad who was always so nice to my friends, but he didn't like me much because he wanted a son not a daughter.
Kat
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Hi Brett,
Your poem is written really well and the rhyming in it is wonderful. It tells a great story about growing up although it also made me sad. I had a dad who was always so nice to my friends, but he didn't like me much because he wanted a son not a daughter.
Kat
Comment Written 07-Apr-2015
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Thanks for your comments. Appreciate them a whole lot.
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You're very welcome.
Comment from kiwijenny
We applied the so called board of education too.
It was a slender switch that stung....but my husband used the belt...maybe I can count on one hand how many times he had to use it. But when he did it counted. Well penned...there was sadness too
God bless
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2015
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We applied the so called board of education too.
It was a slender switch that stung....but my husband used the belt...maybe I can count on one hand how many times he had to use it. But when he did it counted. Well penned...there was sadness too
God bless
Comment Written 07-Apr-2015
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Comment from stephybs
This is extremely well written and was a joy to read with all that rhyme, rythem and smooth flow. giving good vission and very descriptive. Excellent!. Stephybs
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This is extremely well written and was a joy to read with all that rhyme, rythem and smooth flow. giving good vission and very descriptive. Excellent!. Stephybs
Comment Written 06-Apr-2015
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Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, an excellent tribute to constructive corporal discipline in almost perfect rhyme - the rhyme would have been perfect, but for the uneven rhythm created by unnecessary prepositional words. This is so very easily corrected, by reading and rereading this waiting masterpiece aloud several times, objectively, and omitting the aforementioned described words...
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In my opinion, an excellent tribute to constructive corporal discipline in almost perfect rhyme - the rhyme would have been perfect, but for the uneven rhythm created by unnecessary prepositional words. This is so very easily corrected, by reading and rereading this waiting masterpiece aloud several times, objectively, and omitting the aforementioned described words...
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Comment Written 06-Apr-2015
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