Life, Love, and Other Disasters
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "One Perfect Day"A collection of poems on these themes
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Comment from walbc
I love this poem. The imagery it evokes is truly beautiful...."we ran to greet the promise of the vines";" ....olive grove that wrapped us in its gnarled and twisted arms..." - examples of a very talented poet. The belief of a promise that youth will last forever is universal for all of time. Memories, for most of us, will never fade, but are a poor substitute for the reality of youth. An extremely heartfelt poem, Kiwisteveh. Wendy.
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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2015
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I love this poem. The imagery it evokes is truly beautiful...."we ran to greet the promise of the vines";" ....olive grove that wrapped us in its gnarled and twisted arms..." - examples of a very talented poet. The belief of a promise that youth will last forever is universal for all of time. Memories, for most of us, will never fade, but are a poor substitute for the reality of youth. An extremely heartfelt poem, Kiwisteveh. Wendy.
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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2015
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Wendy, thanks so much for the generous review and thoughtful words.
Steve