Comment from Sankey

Excellent

Good one mate. Wish you well. Thanks for sharing. Very typical Mikey but I love it! Keep up the good work. Pray for me mate. On big course of Anti biotics maybe the Lord is gonna restore mt hearing afterall in rebuke of the audiologist who claimed I would not have any improvement of hearing.

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2014

Big prayers for that my friend. I once lost my voice for a year. (singing, not speaking) It turned out to be a bacteria that needed the right antibiotic. Came back in a couple days. That would be wonderful. We are big on miracles here! I bet on the Lord, what's an audiologist know? I bet he can't even carry a tune. :) mikey

reply by Sankey on 17-Nov-2014

Yeah ell love you to meet a Missionary in Vanuatu and Fiji and New Caledonia he had a growth on his lung way back (since had an awful time with Malaria) but anyway our pastor laid hands on him and prayed and the Radiologist was amazed on further xray to see growth on lung had disappeared. We are baptists and not big on the Benny Hin crowd and all that (I call him Benny the Rooster) However I do know God heals even with out a big pony show AMEN! My friend phillipe is a French national saved here in Australia been a missionary now for thirty years he is on Face book should you care to meet him he was in US recently at Valley Forge I believe.

Comment from Gargantuan2

Excellent

I, personally, am not much of a poet. If you want a funny limerick, I could probably handle it, but that would be the extent of my skill. This being said, I see nothing wrong with the free verse at hand so I will leave it at that. Until next time :)

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 Comment Written 17-Nov-2014

Comment from pipersfancy

Excellent

Looks like I've caught this one "hot off the press"! And, a lovely one it is!

I really like how you set the stage for your writing to begin... like a ritual, placing things needed for inspiration. I'm like that - need my black, spiral-bound notebook and specific pen... prefer to sit at my kitchen table after the breakfast dishes have been cleared... coffee in the right mug... then I write.

I also get the image of Mickey Mouse, in the role of Sorcerer's Apprentice... creating wild worlds at will (be careful the Sorcerer doesn't box your ears, Mikey!)

Best wishes for this contest!

Christina

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 Comment Written 16-Nov-2014