Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is very good imagery and descriptive scheme.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014

Thank you Charlie. hugs, teri

reply by c_lucas on 02-Oct-2014

You're welcome, Teri. Charlie

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

I did like your poem and its message. You did a good job with the prompt. One thing I have to mention is the use of the word 'knowing' and 'so'. Seems too much to me. However, I did not write the poem, and I am not counting off. Good job and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014

Thank you. hugs, teri

Comment from jlsavell

Excellent

Teri, Titan lady, this is sweet and romantic. Love this side of you. So glad you're back. Is this biographical in the now or is the experience you've drawn on? Well done... Jimi

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 Comment Written 01-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014

Thank you Jimi. hugs, teri