Comment from onebrit

Excellent

Too funny. Great picture that certainly does look as if it's bare buttocks. What a great idea. I like the brevity of your piece, I love these short little poems....so much more consise, and thus precise!

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2014

Thanks, onebrit. What luck to find that perfect photo on Google images.

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

This is wonderful ...something I have never thought of before..
God's mooning us..
Ha ha ha ha...plump half circle
Well done
God bless

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2014

Thanks, Kiwi. Inspiration from a night walk.

Comment from Dawny53

Excellent

I absolutely love it! These short works are so difficult to write.. even harder to achieve excellence with. I rarely review them because frankly most are not very good. This one is terrific!

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2014

You made my day, Dawn. Thanks for a great review.

Comment from ExperiencingLiphe

Excellent

Hahaha. I loved the last line. It made me giggle. I never thought of this before but you do make a valid point. Great job friend

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2014

Thanks, Meghan. Now, go outside and get mooned. L0L

Comment from Sasha

Excellent

Oh my, this is delightful and so, so clever. You are a true genius when it comes to this style. You got me to laugh out loud too.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2014

Hope you weren't drinking coffee, again. L0L

reply by Sasha on 25-Sep-2014

No, I've learned to put my cup down when I read your work...lol

Comment from gypsycaravan

Excellent

There is great humor in this one, Spitfire. I will never be able to look at a half moon again without laughing and thinking of this. Way to go, girl.

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 Comment Written 25-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2014

Laughing is better than howling -oh, that's the full moon.

Comment from mjac777

Excellent

God's mooning us. "sometimes we deserve it."
lol..... very funny.
The pic is stunning .... I think it's going to be a moody broody piece and you do a 180 ......
Well done.

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 Comment Written 25-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2014

The picture would make one think that. Glad I surprised you.