All Those Puzzling Pieces
Viewing comments for Chapter 52 "Beginnings and Endings"What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?
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Comment from CR Delport
As one grow older your perspective in life changes and so does your priorities. Curiosity also change. I really love that art work :)
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2013
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As one grow older your perspective in life changes and so does your priorities. Curiosity also change. I really love that art work :)
Comment Written 24-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2013
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Thx CR - :)Sharyn
Comment from Alexander E Poet
Love your notes, great message profound imagery Nice flow profoundly explain to astute poets I thought this was great reading poem about life, very philosophical No typo's and nothing to change as far as i can see. Alexander Q*Q
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Love your notes, great message profound imagery Nice flow profoundly explain to astute poets I thought this was great reading poem about life, very philosophical No typo's and nothing to change as far as i can see. Alexander Q*Q
Comment Written 24-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2013
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Bless you for your lovely six on this one Alex! Good to see you posting again, too - I always enjoy your perspective.
:)Sharyn
Comment from janalma
Oh, the meaning of life. Good job here, expressing the questions and qualms we all have sometimes. Even when we believe there is more than what we see, there is our human doubt to trouble us. Nice, lyrical sounding poem. Enjoyed and didn't notice spag. As for form I am really not qualified to judge. Seems fine to me, tho.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2013
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Oh, the meaning of life. Good job here, expressing the questions and qualms we all have sometimes. Even when we believe there is more than what we see, there is our human doubt to trouble us. Nice, lyrical sounding poem. Enjoyed and didn't notice spag. As for form I am really not qualified to judge. Seems fine to me, tho.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2013
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thx so much! :)Sharyn
Comment from GWinterwin
Good poem with much thought and words to ponder. Your words flow well and rhyme good as this story or thought of how life is and what it consist of. Enjoyed reading this very much.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2013
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Good poem with much thought and words to ponder. Your words flow well and rhyme good as this story or thought of how life is and what it consist of. Enjoyed reading this very much.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2013
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thx so much GW! :)Sharyn
Comment from GarthL
I sang along merrily throughout Sharyn. It all flows beautifully, asks some very relevant questions and has great imagery, metaphor and analogy. I really liked the 4th verse as a refrain, or chorus, and the grace notes in the iambic meter work well. I'll grab my guitar when I next time I read it but it seemed to work perfectly in 3/4 time with 4 bars per line. Very well done, I enjoyed it immensely. Many regards, Garth
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I sang along merrily throughout Sharyn. It all flows beautifully, asks some very relevant questions and has great imagery, metaphor and analogy. I really liked the 4th verse as a refrain, or chorus, and the grace notes in the iambic meter work well. I'll grab my guitar when I next time I read it but it seemed to work perfectly in 3/4 time with 4 bars per line. Very well done, I enjoyed it immensely. Many regards, Garth
Comment Written 24-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2013
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The 4th was my favorite, too, Garth - please do pick up your guitar! I'm having fun humming at the moment! :)Sharyn
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Cheers mate!!!
Comment from Njorgensen
Wow! This poem made me think. I'm speaking of the message, firstly. So profound, yet written innocently which allows the reader to relate to it. Once this happened, my mind opened to the message even more. This was very well done and I appreciated your words of explanation at the end. Thank you for sharing this.
-Nancy
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2013
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Wow! This poem made me think. I'm speaking of the message, firstly. So profound, yet written innocently which allows the reader to relate to it. Once this happened, my mind opened to the message even more. This was very well done and I appreciated your words of explanation at the end. Thank you for sharing this.
-Nancy
Comment Written 24-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2013
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My pleasure Nancy - so glad you enjoyed! :)Sharyn
Comment from jobax
Very nice rhyme and meter with good teaching explanation. The message and philosophy of the passage is well presented in verse.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2013
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Very nice rhyme and meter with good teaching explanation. The message and philosophy of the passage is well presented in verse.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2013
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Thank you so much John.
:)Sharyn
Comment from Glasstruth
Great artwork. Questioning the purpose of life, and where do we lie in the scheme of things? Who knows. Your abab rhyming with meter is just amazing. Your author notes did help explain the form. Awesome! Les
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2013
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Great artwork. Questioning the purpose of life, and where do we lie in the scheme of things? Who knows. Your abab rhyming with meter is just amazing. Your author notes did help explain the form. Awesome! Les
Comment Written 23-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2013
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Bless you for this one Les - questions we never cease to ask, hmm? A special thank you, too, for your lovely six!
:)Sharyn
Comment from alexgeorge
Aah those Greeks, and their words of wisdom and poetry! This does move like a song, though I'm no poet, I felt it. The issues of life and creation have plagued man since he was risen above the primates. Our childhood innocence gives way to deliberation and soul searching as we grow.
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Aah those Greeks, and their words of wisdom and poetry! This does move like a song, though I'm no poet, I felt it. The issues of life and creation have plagued man since he was risen above the primates. Our childhood innocence gives way to deliberation and soul searching as we grow.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2013
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All of the above, alex! Thank you so much! :)Sharyn
Comment from Titan Black
The way you travel from universe to universe
Within the realm of love. Your positivity is
amazing. You have great word play and metaphores.
And I like that. Keep doing your thing.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2013
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The way you travel from universe to universe
Within the realm of love. Your positivity is
amazing. You have great word play and metaphores.
And I like that. Keep doing your thing.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2013
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Bless you Titan! :)Sharyn