All Those Puzzling Pieces
Viewing comments for Chapter 24 "The Music She Skips To"What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?
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Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes this is well written my friend so much going on in this poem you bring it too life well I enjoyed well done regards Jill
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2013
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Yes this is well written my friend so much going on in this poem you bring it too life well I enjoyed well done regards Jill
Comment Written 10-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2013
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thx so much Jill! :)S
Comment from robina1978
Excellent picture to complement your poem. I think most of us can relate to this free verse. It appeals to many of my senses and still a whole story in it.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2013
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Excellent picture to complement your poem. I think most of us can relate to this free verse. It appeals to many of my senses and still a whole story in it.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2013
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thx so much Ine! :)))Sharyn
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welcome
Comment from Sararb
Very cute poem. With all the cell phones and etc ours teens ave lost communication with us and the real world. Your poem explains that, and what a joy to see them without it at times. Sararb
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Very cute poem. With all the cell phones and etc ours teens ave lost communication with us and the real world. Your poem explains that, and what a joy to see them without it at times. Sararb
Comment Written 10-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2013
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and another thank you for another lovely review my dear! :)Sharyn
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Oh yes, yes, yes I am so glad someone else wishes for the same as I do. This is a breath of fresh air and I love the content. thank you
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Oh yes, yes, yes I am so glad someone else wishes for the same as I do. This is a breath of fresh air and I love the content. thank you
Comment Written 10-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2013
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You're a lady after my own heart, Barb - you know that, don't you???? :)Sharyn
Comment from Black_Oxygen
This is fun to read poetry. I like the way the words
are arranged on the page. Many readers can relate to
this poem. It held my interest from start to finish.
Thank You for your creation.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2013
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This is fun to read poetry. I like the way the words
are arranged on the page. Many readers can relate to
this poem. It held my interest from start to finish.
Thank You for your creation.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2013
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thx so much Ron! :)S
Comment from Dawn Munro
Simply put, this is another "Sharyn" poem - I would recognize one mixed in with thousands at this point, my friend. Your special touch always tugs at one emotion or anther, and it's so honest. I loved it, Sharyn, and 'feel' the connection between that young woman and your protagonist. (you)
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2013
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Simply put, this is another "Sharyn" poem - I would recognize one mixed in with thousands at this point, my friend. Your special touch always tugs at one emotion or anther, and it's so honest. I loved it, Sharyn, and 'feel' the connection between that young woman and your protagonist. (you)
Comment Written 10-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2013
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Bless you, Dawn - I guess I do have a fairly distinctive style, hmm? :)S
Comment from Sasha
I have no doubt many can relate to this one. I live in a very poor city and yet every (and I do mean every) child has a cell phone. I don't own one. It seems that face to face conversations are on their way to becoming a thing of the past. Great work with this one. A terrific poem, well written and most definitely thought provoking.
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I have no doubt many can relate to this one. I live in a very poor city and yet every (and I do mean every) child has a cell phone. I don't own one. It seems that face to face conversations are on their way to becoming a thing of the past. Great work with this one. A terrific poem, well written and most definitely thought provoking.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2013
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same in Indonesia - I don't understand, I really DO NOT! :))s
Comment from GWHARGIS
Good piece. I gotchills from the end. I am with you on the plugged in world. It makes me think of that song from the sixties, In the Year 2525. The more electronics, the use of the brain. Convenience is nice but nothing beats feeling alive with out it. Nicely done.
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Good piece. I gotchills from the end. I am with you on the plugged in world. It makes me think of that song from the sixties, In the Year 2525. The more electronics, the use of the brain. Convenience is nice but nothing beats feeling alive with out it. Nicely done.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2013
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OH BLESS YOU my dear for your lovely six on this one - sounds like we speak the same language! :)Sharyn
Comment from The Guardian
Funny the images I got while reading this over-stimulated, plugged in society. I imagined 2,000 drivers/minute driving across the George Washington Bridge talking on their cell phones. Yeesh! There's something pleasurable about unplugging and your poem reminds the reader how far our society has moved away from the simplest pleasures.
Well done.
Merle
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Funny the images I got while reading this over-stimulated, plugged in society. I imagined 2,000 drivers/minute driving across the George Washington Bridge talking on their cell phones. Yeesh! There's something pleasurable about unplugging and your poem reminds the reader how far our society has moved away from the simplest pleasures.
Well done.
Merle
Comment Written 10-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2013
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You've got the picture, Merle. Thank you so much! :)Sharyn
Comment from wordsareus
I enjoyed reading your poem. It's nice to see that someone is still walking to the beat of her own music! I can relate to how you feel about the "super-plugged computer-hugging" world.
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I enjoyed reading your poem. It's nice to see that someone is still walking to the beat of her own music! I can relate to how you feel about the "super-plugged computer-hugging" world.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2013
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thx so much my dear! this stuff is certainly crazy-making and I must admit I don't understand the attraction! :)S