Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

Men hate shopping and grumble and groan. They have been De-humanized having to go and sit and wait for his shopping mate. She takes forever and he wishes he was home and not there

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2013

Thank you!

Steve

Comment from Black_Oxygen

Excellent

So many men can relate to this poetry. The rhymes
are not forced and if flows nicely. It uses non-
confusing language making it easy to read and
understand. Thank You for your creation.

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2013

Thank you!

Steve

Comment from 2manykids

Excellent

Funny! I have one thing to tell you, do like my husband says, "Honey, I will go to this way, you go that. I will meet you back here." He goes to the tool section!

I liked the way it flowed. Only one part I stumbled on and it was; I'll be just one (or two, or five). I understood it but it did not go as smoothly as the rest of the poem. Only thing you left out of the poem was the poor guy having to hold his wife's purse :)

Great job. Good luck

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 Comment Written 24-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2013

I like the tool dept too but I can't spend as long in there as my wife can in clothing!

Thanks for the nice review.

Steve

Comment from Walu Feral

Excellent

Hahahahahahaha! That is a great poem mate! I loved it and got a real kick out of it. When This happens to me I just go to the pub (bar)! That seems to hurry her up, hehehe. Cheers and good luck, Fez.

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 Comment Written 24-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2013

Thanks, Fez.

Well the poem was a winner - does that make up for the hours of torture..... Nuh!

Steve