All Those Puzzling Pieces
Viewing comments for Chapter 44 "Bites of Delight"What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?
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Comment from Perp Ihebom
I like the way you compare life with something edible and delicious. The poem is the kind that makes one think deeply about life from various angles. well done
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I like the way you compare life with something edible and delicious. The poem is the kind that makes one think deeply about life from various angles. well done
Comment Written 02-Jan-2013
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thx so much Perp! :) Sharyn
Comment from Changeisgood
Visionary, Very delightful bite of a poem. Seems you have aged well (but are NOT old yet) and the comparison to your mother in the mirror a good image. Graceful as you grow, it seems a good way to take on the years. Change
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Visionary, Very delightful bite of a poem. Seems you have aged well (but are NOT old yet) and the comparison to your mother in the mirror a good image. Graceful as you grow, it seems a good way to take on the years. Change
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Bless you, Change - and a double/triple blessing for your lovely six!
:) Sharyn
Comment from Terror2s
A great poem tht most forties and above can relate to. I think as beauty withers, age and contentment replace it if you are very lucky. T2
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A great poem tht most forties and above can relate to. I think as beauty withers, age and contentment replace it if you are very lucky. T2
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and you DO have to be luck T2, that's for sure. thx so much my dear! :) Sharyn
Comment from Diamondlight11
A very delightful way of expressing the journey of life and growing of age. I love your play on words and using food to express the pleasurable moments of life. A nice read.
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A very delightful way of expressing the journey of life and growing of age. I love your play on words and using food to express the pleasurable moments of life. A nice read.
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thx so much Dl! :) Sharyn
Comment from skye
I love the way you integrated food with the growth process.
You captured so many aspects of life within this terrific free verse.
Lively, fun, descriptive, and enjoyable.
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I love the way you integrated food with the growth process.
You captured so many aspects of life within this terrific free verse.
Lively, fun, descriptive, and enjoyable.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2013
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thank you so much skye! :)Sharyn
Comment from EllenV
A delightful piece of poetry, Visionary. I can very much relate to it... Finding joy in seemingly little things. For me it is the falling if snow and the magical world after it has fallen.
A lovely read to start my day!
Ellen
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A delightful piece of poetry, Visionary. I can very much relate to it... Finding joy in seemingly little things. For me it is the falling if snow and the magical world after it has fallen.
A lovely read to start my day!
Ellen
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I LOVE snow, Ellen! yes, that is magic indeed. Bless you, my dear, for reading & enjoying, and a double/triple blessing for your lovely 'six'!
Best wishes and Happy New Year!
Sharyn
Comment from Nebukadneser
Wow! Wow! Wow! what beautiful writing of the highest order. You deserve a six star, but I've run out of them. What a delightful way to look at yourself in the mirror philosofying about the passing of life leaving its tracks on our lives.
Well done.
cool bananas and warm regards
Nebukadneser
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Wow! Wow! Wow! what beautiful writing of the highest order. You deserve a six star, but I've run out of them. What a delightful way to look at yourself in the mirror philosofying about the passing of life leaving its tracks on our lives.
Well done.
cool bananas and warm regards
Nebukadneser
Comment Written 02-Jan-2013
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thank you so much Nebukadeser! (and I love banana bread and bananas flambe!) :))))))
Sharyn
Comment from Cornetist
A formidable contest entry! It will take some doing to match the clarity and humor this poem demonstrates. I was particularly impressed with the clever internal rhymes. Nicely done...good luck in the contest!
Cornetist
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A formidable contest entry! It will take some doing to match the clarity and humor this poem demonstrates. I was particularly impressed with the clever internal rhymes. Nicely done...good luck in the contest!
Cornetist
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thx so much Cornetist! :) Sharyn
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Yes, growing old is sweet in so many ways. I can relate to this poem because I now appreciate things I once was oblivious to! Very good
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Yes, growing old is sweet in so many ways. I can relate to this poem because I now appreciate things I once was oblivious to! Very good
Comment Written 02-Jan-2013
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thank you so much Janice - how are you? haven't seen you on the site for a while?
:) Sharyn
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I took a little break. I'm glad to be back. Happy New Year, Sharyn. Janice
Comment from el twelve
that was beautifully written and most people could relate, growing older or die you have a choice, I would rather grow older, LOL
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that was beautifully written and most people could relate, growing older or die you have a choice, I would rather grow older, LOL
Comment Written 02-Jan-2013
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thx so much L12! :) Sharyn