Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

What a funny and well written poem. I love the double meaning of the title. Clever excuses this louse has for everything, but at the end (no pun intended) he is caught.
Great entry. Good luck.

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2012

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2012

Thank you - some great entries in this contest - worth a look.

Steve

Comment from Vladilynn

Excellent

This one true funny poem! I laughed so much reading every stanza. LOL
Men, when they get caught and still wants to escape and always tries hard to make good excuses. LMAO

They're something special. LOL

Well written!!! Good luck for the contest!

Love much,
Lynn:0)

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2012

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2012

Thank you, Lynn - some great entries in this contest - worth a look.

Steve

Comment from nancy_e_davis

Excellent

That is soooo cute. Deny, deny, deny and if that doesn't work deny again! I must say you have a good shot at winning here. Love the picture! Well done. Nancy

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2012

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2012

Thank you, Nancy - almost like I have experience of it.... - some great entries in this contest - worth a look.

Steve

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I am pleased you too were motivated to try this new form. I enjoyed your rhymes and rhythm. Your lighthearted recounting of Pete's friend's indiscretions is quite imaginative and humorous. Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2012

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2012

Thank you, Joan - some great entries in this contest - worth a look.

Steve

Comment from squid152

Excellent

Thank you for the education on the tetrabreve. I have probably written one but did not know it. Quite humorous poem that unfortunately describes a lot of marriages.-Squid

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2012

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2012

Thank you - some great entries in this contest - worth a look.

Steve

Comment from Meta~Mark

Excellent

A clever witty ditty of a poem my friend. I love your stanza breaks and the rhyme pattern that follows throughout this private eye caught you tomfoolery tale, excellent

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2012

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2012

Thank you - some great entries in this contest - worth a look.

Steve

Comment from Dawn Munro

Excellent

Oh if this isn't the cutest and funniest poem!!! I love the artwork you have chosen to go with it as well You have used this form to great advantage, in my opinion.

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2012

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2012

Thank you, Dawn - some great entries in this contest - worth a look.

Steve

reply by Dawn Munro on 26-Oct-2012

Thank you - I will try to find the time - been away andso far behind iny reading(and I hate to let people down!) :)

Comment from Prabs_Ranjan

Excellent

First time reading the terabreve poem, and really loved it.The backdrop of philandering is aptly put in here. Good luck for the contest.

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2012

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2012

Thank you - some great entries in this contest - worth a look.

Steve

Comment from thecoe

Excellent

very clever and well portrayed. it was playful and flowed well and the rhymes fit into the overal scheme i enjoyed the read. well done

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2012

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2012

Thank you - some great entries in this contest - worth a look.

Steve

Comment from GWHARGIS

Exceptional

I had too much fun with this. Your mounting excuses only slightly less fun than the mounting evidence. The flow was only slightly off in a couple of lines but who really cares. This poem was fun at its best.

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2012

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2012

Thank you for the great review and the six stars - some great entries in this contest - worth a look.

Steve