Derriere
Paying Homage to a great ASSet ...44 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I laughed my socks off when I got to the end and then went on the read your author notes!! Sheer genius! How warped are our minds! I wish you all the best of luck in the competition, you deserve to win with this 'cheeky' number!!
xsx
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2012
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I laughed my socks off when I got to the end and then went on the read your author notes!! Sheer genius! How warped are our minds! I wish you all the best of luck in the competition, you deserve to win with this 'cheeky' number!!
xsx
Comment Written 05-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2012
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Wow, thanks so much for your delightful review and support of my notes. Cheers and yes from one warped mind to another - I am so glad you enjoyed my poem to this extent.
Regards Closet
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You are very welcome, I enjoy a good giggle now and again!! xsx
Comment from Oldsteamer
Had me going.
You put a lot of thought into ii.
Good rhymes, good pattern within each stanza
Good double entendre . When you got to the wood I almost fell over.
All the best,
- R -
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2012
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Had me going.
You put a lot of thought into ii.
Good rhymes, good pattern within each stanza
Good double entendre . When you got to the wood I almost fell over.
All the best,
- R -
Comment Written 05-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2012
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Haha...nice I could get you going. Thanks for your thoughtful review.
Cheers closet
Comment from OLA THOMAS
You amuse me so much with your author's notes. You may not know that you've got a good work in this. Writing this by keeping a neutral mind makes the work to flow and down to earth.
The picture really goes.
ola thomas.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2012
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You amuse me so much with your author's notes. You may not know that you've got a good work in this. Writing this by keeping a neutral mind makes the work to flow and down to earth.
The picture really goes.
ola thomas.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2012
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Haha, thanks for liking my notes. Just wasn't sure the pic appropriate for my humour. Not to worry, thanks for your encouraging review.
Cheers closet
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Well now Miss P, I love how you show up with just the right amount of omg cheeky derriere personified from a wooden chair...Yeee Haw my girl sometimes the brilliance of the write strikes your reader with a fat cheeky smile! Absolutely an incredible write. Loved it. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2012
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Well now Miss P, I love how you show up with just the right amount of omg cheeky derriere personified from a wooden chair...Yeee Haw my girl sometimes the brilliance of the write strikes your reader with a fat cheeky smile! Absolutely an incredible write. Loved it. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 05-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2012
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Haha, here she is, thanks kiwi for your delightful response and sixer...yes the chair is a lucky little vegemite! LOL
Thanks for enjoying my twisted sense of humour, well actually this WAS the chair talking.
Have a great day
Cheers P
xoxo
Comment from ephraim crud, COS.
no bout adoubt it, it's sotta be a gix!
it's bot me got and hothered
and me mongue's got in a tix!
whoop-whoop! brilliant, me Closet!
and muchly good luck for the contest!
oh, S1, L2 & 8: 'its', and
there's an unwanted 'to' in S2, L1.
muchly love and hugs, xxxxx, eph.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2012
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no bout adoubt it, it's sotta be a gix!
it's bot me got and hothered
and me mongue's got in a tix!
whoop-whoop! brilliant, me Closet!
and muchly good luck for the contest!
oh, S1, L2 & 8: 'its', and
there's an unwanted 'to' in S2, L1.
muchly love and hugs, xxxxx, eph.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2012
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Awww thanks eph...ephing marvellous sixer review and thanks for the punctuation pickups there...most appweciated.
Big squisher hugs
Closet xoxo
Comment from Hitcher
Paying homage to a great ASSet indeed friend, I think I was that chair in another life because I definitely have a fetish for naked, smoking hot flesh sitting on my...Whoa, Sorry about that friend, I think your poem sent me off to a place of pleasure all about me, me ,me.
Loved your triolet, all three stanzas[show off]. I definitely have no problem with your chosen artwork, another 45 degrees to the left would have been perfection :) Good luck
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2012
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Paying homage to a great ASSet indeed friend, I think I was that chair in another life because I definitely have a fetish for naked, smoking hot flesh sitting on my...Whoa, Sorry about that friend, I think your poem sent me off to a place of pleasure all about me, me ,me.
Loved your triolet, all three stanzas[show off]. I definitely have no problem with your chosen artwork, another 45 degrees to the left would have been perfection :) Good luck
Comment Written 05-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2012
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LOL Thanks so much mister. Hey you may have been that chair in another life...but I was that smokin hot derriere in anoth...ahhhhh never mind. Yeah, me, me, me. Thanks for your enchanting review. I'll be sure to correct those angles next time...45 you say? *smirky*
Cheers P
PS Tanks for the six...you da bomb...the H-bomb! Haha *double smirk*
Comment from Joan E.
Yeah--look who's back (pun intended)! The picture is "sizzling," but so be it!! I relished your salute to such assets in a double triolet. I liked your play on "mass" and taking on the chair's point of view. Thanks for the full meaning of "arsey" though we could get most of it from the contest. I enjoyed your fun and wish you well in the contest. Hugs- Joan
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2012
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Yeah--look who's back (pun intended)! The picture is "sizzling," but so be it!! I relished your salute to such assets in a double triolet. I liked your play on "mass" and taking on the chair's point of view. Thanks for the full meaning of "arsey" though we could get most of it from the contest. I enjoyed your fun and wish you well in the contest. Hugs- Joan
Comment Written 05-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2012
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Haha thanks for a fun review Joan...I hate having to explain things and find when I don't, everyone asks then when I do, I need not have! LOL
Loved your welcoming comments...hope you are well my friend.
Thanks again
Cheers Phillippa
xo
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I have the same experience--I recently explained what "mantilla" means and some folks said thanks but one said it wasn't necessary. As we well know, we can't please everyone. lol It's a hot one here today--hope you're enjoying a mild winter. Hugs- Joan
Comment from despiser
Think of me as an accesorized chair; fully decked out * smirky smirk *
I do love chairy pie mmmmm LOL
nice little rhymer cpBWW. Flows real nice down the chair... poem. Yes, a poem I believe.
Take care not to get to excited on da chair though or you make widdo slips * smirky smirk *:
I love it when you to nestle there :-)
-DEE
xoxo
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2012
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Think of me as an accesorized chair; fully decked out * smirky smirk *
I do love chairy pie mmmmm LOL
nice little rhymer cpBWW. Flows real nice down the chair... poem. Yes, a poem I believe.
Take care not to get to excited on da chair though or you make widdo slips * smirky smirk *:
I love it when you to nestle there :-)
-DEE
xoxo
Comment Written 04-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2012
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Oooh you naughty accessorised chair DEE. *smirk*
I appreciate your saucy response. Yes, this IS a poem ninny.
Widdo slips...pwease! LOL
Cute review...thanks for picking up on that stoopid typo...fixed it honey! LOL
Cheers cpjfMBWW xxx
Comment from Dougspoetry
Just Wonderful! :/ I don't see anything from you for quite sometime, I innocently click on the message, and BLAM! There she is, just what I don't need to see. Oh well! :) Knowing it's your poem I can overlook your risqu© photograph. Great rhyming and steady meter. Missed seeing your posts, hope you're doing well.
God Bless!
Doug
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2012
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Just Wonderful! :/ I don't see anything from you for quite sometime, I innocently click on the message, and BLAM! There she is, just what I don't need to see. Oh well! :) Knowing it's your poem I can overlook your risqu© photograph. Great rhyming and steady meter. Missed seeing your posts, hope you're doing well.
God Bless!
Doug
Comment Written 04-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2012
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Wow thanks Douglas...yes you should know little miss innocent by now *smirk*...thanks for baring...whoops I mean bearing with me. I'm doing okay but pretty busy with family at the moment. Little time to post but writing and stashing plenty where I can. Cheers, thanks for the sixer rating.
Closet xoxo
Comment from Warren Rodgers
OHHH So clever! personify the chair! haha love it! I can tell you right now, my friend, after reading this great triple triolet, I wish I were that chair! lol.
I love how you reveal the fact that the speaker is the chair and how you draw parallels from a man to the chair! "Your flesh is silk, my wood is real
I love it when you nestle there
A cheeky squeeze I long to steal"
Very creative, as I have come to expect from you! Great meter and rhymes, the repeat pattern look good to me in all three stanzas. The photo, yea I'm old enough to view it either way :-} Good luck with the judges!
Great to see you post again!
All my best
cheers!
Waaazzaaa
xoxo
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2012
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OHHH So clever! personify the chair! haha love it! I can tell you right now, my friend, after reading this great triple triolet, I wish I were that chair! lol.
I love how you reveal the fact that the speaker is the chair and how you draw parallels from a man to the chair! "Your flesh is silk, my wood is real
I love it when you nestle there
A cheeky squeeze I long to steal"
Very creative, as I have come to expect from you! Great meter and rhymes, the repeat pattern look good to me in all three stanzas. The photo, yea I'm old enough to view it either way :-} Good luck with the judges!
Great to see you post again!
All my best
cheers!
Waaazzaaa
xoxo
Comment Written 04-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2012
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LOL Thanks Wazza, I appreciate the sixer as always. Glad you enjoyed my poem and hope you are keeping well.
Hardly here these days...family life is very busy but I am trying to touch base now and again where I can. I plan to pop in soon and catch up on your last couple. Please forgive my tardiness. Take care my friend.
Cheers CPJ
xoxo