Expressing Myself
Viewing comments for Chapter 35 "Vanity Solutions"Writing my way out of depression / mental illness
50 total reviews
Comment from manjuneelam
A lovely composition with good choice of words. The poem is very expressive and convoy's it's message well. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2012
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A lovely composition with good choice of words. The poem is very expressive and convoy's it's message well. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2012
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Thank you very much!
Comment from ameen786
Hello playinaround, my friend a superb, witty write and thanks for the laugh. Just curious which came first the picture or your poem, regardless perfect presentation.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2012
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Hello playinaround, my friend a superb, witty write and thanks for the laugh. Just curious which came first the picture or your poem, regardless perfect presentation.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2012
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Believe it or not, I wrote the poem first. I did a lot of searching and came across this wonderful cartoon that fit perfectly. Thank you so much for your kind words and generous review!
Comment from Doc Holiday
Very funny 5-7-5 poem about the aging process through our enemy of gravity. Great picture accompanying your poem.
Everything is back in order from standing on our heads!
Nice work!
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2012
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Very funny 5-7-5 poem about the aging process through our enemy of gravity. Great picture accompanying your poem.
Everything is back in order from standing on our heads!
Nice work!
Comment Written 29-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2012
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Thank you so much for your kind and generous review!
Comment from Amy Comstock
This is just the chuckle I needed before heading off to bed! Love your words...love the artwork you chose! Thanks so much for sharing!
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2012
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This is just the chuckle I needed before heading off to bed! Love your words...love the artwork you chose! Thanks so much for sharing!
Comment Written 29-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2012
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I'm so glad you got a chuckle, that's what I was aiming for! Thank you so much for your kind words and generous review!
Comment from catch22
This is a pretty witty 5-7-5 poem that actually required some thinking on my part (but I finally figured it out). The form and syllable count were spot on too.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2012
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This is a pretty witty 5-7-5 poem that actually required some thinking on my part (but I finally figured it out). The form and syllable count were spot on too.
Comment Written 29-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2012
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Thank you so much for taking the time to review my little poem!
Comment from CassMarie
Haha, this made me laugh. The picture brings it all together. Thanks for the light, short read. It's nice to have one of those every now and then.
Cass
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2012
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Haha, this made me laugh. The picture brings it all together. Thanks for the light, short read. It's nice to have one of those every now and then.
Cass
Comment Written 29-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2012
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Thank you so much, I'm glad you got a laugh!! Thanks for your kind words and generous review!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This 5-7-5 is so cute, and the picture gives the perfect enhancement! My little grandson asked me if I would get any taller. I said I would only get wider. He said, "Oh no!"
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2012
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This 5-7-5 is so cute, and the picture gives the perfect enhancement! My little grandson asked me if I would get any taller. I said I would only get wider. He said, "Oh no!"
Comment Written 29-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2012
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That is too funny, what an adorable grandson he must be! Thank you for taking the time to read and review!!
Comment from Espresso momma
LOL, very funny. I just don't admit it. But it was cute. A very perfectly written 5-7-5. Thanks for sharing, have a great week..
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2012
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LOL, very funny. I just don't admit it. But it was cute. A very perfectly written 5-7-5. Thanks for sharing, have a great week..
Comment Written 29-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2012
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review! So glad it made you laugh!!
Comment from Karen Payton Holt
Hi there, made me smile...us oldies do look better upside down!
Gravity set in, never a truer word said and the picture is amusing also.
:0)
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2012
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Hi there, made me smile...us oldies do look better upside down!
Gravity set in, never a truer word said and the picture is amusing also.
:0)
Comment Written 29-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2012
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Thank you so much for your kind words and generous review!! So glad it made you smile!
Comment from samriddle
Excellent poem with great humor. The image is hilarious and compliments your writing perfectly! You have done such a brilliant job to make the poem flow so well in so few words. Great 5-7-5,
Sam
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2012
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Excellent poem with great humor. The image is hilarious and compliments your writing perfectly! You have done such a brilliant job to make the poem flow so well in so few words. Great 5-7-5,
Sam
Comment Written 29-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2012
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Wow! Thank you for this awesome review, so glad it made you smile!