Comment from #1GRANDMA

Excellent

WHAT BEAUTIFUL WORDS YOU WROTE IT BRINGS BACK MEMORY'S' OF A GRANDDAUGHTER I HAVE WHEN SHE WAS LITTLE & ALL HER STUFFED ANIMALS WERE HER SCHOOL CHILDREN. SHE WOULD TEACH THEM TO SING AND DRAW BUT THEN AT A CERTAIN TIME SHE WOULD COME TO & SAY GRANDMA WHAT DO YOU HAVE FOR MY CHILDREN SNACK OF COURSE I WOULD HAVE BAKED COOKIES BEFORE HAND & THEN I WOULD HAVE THE TREAT WITH HER & THE CHILDREN. I JUST LOST MY OLDEST DAUGHTER & YET THIS BRINGS HER BACK TOO THANKS FOR THE MEMORY'S

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2005

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

awww this was such a sweet innocent dedication to your son
or at least that is what I got from it

he is lucky to have a mom who will "catch some frogs, and chase butterflies" with him lol

beautifully written from your heart
understandable and relatable, for my daughter is my "little angel"

great imagery too!

thanx for sharing :)

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2005

Comment from Lestina

Excellent

Jewell,

I must say, I like your priorities (family).
I just have one question: who put peanut butter in the dolls diaper?
I bet your brother!
Great writing as usual!
Loved the Poem, fantastic!
Lestina

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 Comment Written 23-Jan-2005