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Comment from miss joyce
I, personally don't speak or read french. It didn't seem to stand in my way of adapting the accent which helps to pick up on the twists of the language. In any event, this was entertaining and a delight to read.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2011
I, personally don't speak or read french. It didn't seem to stand in my way of adapting the accent which helps to pick up on the twists of the language. In any event, this was entertaining and a delight to read.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind words.
Steve
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You're welcome, Steve!
Comment from WilliamDeen
GREAT French poem! Knew just enough to get by!!!
At my place (or Chez Moi)
Where my fiance waited
For risque menage a trois!
Ah this I understood!! LOL...Thanks so much for sharing, Pamela
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2011
GREAT French poem! Knew just enough to get by!!!
At my place (or Chez Moi)
Where my fiance waited
For risque menage a trois!
Ah this I understood!! LOL...Thanks so much for sharing, Pamela
Comment Written 09-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2011
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Oh to have such an understanding and obliging fiance! Glad you limited French was enough to appreciate this bit of silliness.
Steve
Comment from zwrite1
very funny. Humerous poems are so much fun and so memorable. They should be taken more seriously! This poem would be so much fun to read aloud, it would be a real crowd pleaser, even with the liberties you mentioned above. It is so cleverly written that I can over-look any faux pas. You have made me want to practice my French. It is such a sexy language.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2011
very funny. Humerous poems are so much fun and so memorable. They should be taken more seriously! This poem would be so much fun to read aloud, it would be a real crowd pleaser, even with the liberties you mentioned above. It is so cleverly written that I can over-look any faux pas. You have made me want to practice my French. It is such a sexy language.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind review. Sexy language indeed. Do you know the fabulous scene in 'A Fish Called Wanda' where John Cleese seduces Jamie Lee Curtis? Except that was in German!
Steve
Comment from Chris Tee
Merci monseur!!
It is not the best French I have heard but effective for the purpose.
The purist will actually shun work like this but I must say to me it was a pleasurable read.
Well done
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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2011
Merci monseur!!
It is not the best French I have heard but effective for the purpose.
The purist will actually shun work like this but I must say to me it was a pleasurable read.
Well done
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Comment Written 09-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2011
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Thanks for the review and the kind words. No purists belong on this site!
Steve