Flash Fiction
Viewing comments for Chapter 33 "Who Surprised Who?"Collection of Flash, Micro, etc.
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Comment from Dall
That was too cute, imagine telling someone to rot in hell and then winding up at a house like that. That was funny. I enjoyed this very much. Well done!
reply by the author on 04-May-2010
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That was too cute, imagine telling someone to rot in hell and then winding up at a house like that. That was funny. I enjoyed this very much. Well done!
Comment Written 04-May-2010
reply by the author on 04-May-2010
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Dall,
Thankyou for reading and for enjoying the short story. I appreciate the comments. Smiles to you...
Comment from hoopinzero
I found this story to be elegant and your minimilistic prose was interesting. My only suggestion is that it might work better as a poem.
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reply by the author on 04-May-2010
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I found this story to be elegant and your minimilistic prose was interesting. My only suggestion is that it might work better as a poem.
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Comment Written 04-May-2010
reply by the author on 04-May-2010
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hoopinzero
Thanks for reading and reviewing. I appreciate the comments. Couldn't do it in a poem since the contest required a story...prose. Smiles to you....
