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Comment from Teri7
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lol This was just too cute. This is a six star write but I don't have anymore. Sorry. Very good descriptive wording and great dialog. Good luck my friend. Hugs, Teri

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2010

reply by the author on 23-Apr-2010
    Teri,

    Your generous thoughts and comments are worth much more than any six stars. Thank you...Carol
Comment from Sasha
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This is just delightful. Your marvelous and clever ending caught me off guard. I enjoyed this immensely and think is a great entry for the contest. I wish you all the best.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2010

reply by the author on 23-Apr-2010
    Sasha,

    Thank you so much for the wonderful review. Glad you enjoyed the story. Smiles, CArol
Comment from DearlB
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This is a cute well written story.
Here are a couple of things you might consider.
Jimmy(,) chose one across the aisle,
Only Mommy (could)will love him."
Best of luck,
Dearl


 Comment Written 22-Apr-2010

reply by the author on 23-Apr-2010
    Dearl,

    Thanks for stopping by and reading my story and making your suggestions. Always appreciate the help. CArol
Comment from lola29
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Carol, this is such a cute story. Your writing eanbled to envision the scene, and Beth is one smart little girl. Poor Jimmy, seems as if he's having a off-day.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2010

reply by the author on 22-Apr-2010
    Lola,

    Just a little jab at the male species and a high five for the little women....Thanks for the review. Smiles, Carol
Comment from IndianaIrish
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Hahaha...that's great, Carol. I loved her nailing her brother and her line is so good. Best of luck in the contest with your wonderful tale.
Indy :>)

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2010

reply by the author on 22-Apr-2010
    Karyn,

    Yes, this one I enjoyed..a bit of woman power I suppose. Thanks again...Carol
Comment from Judian James
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Good one Carol!! Oh, it was sweet and funny, but still clever and the kind of story any mother can really have a good laugh over. This story had an old-fashioned feel to it somehow. I felt I was going back in time. I loved it

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2010

reply by the author on 22-Apr-2010
    Jude,

    Just exactly what I was aiming at so your response gives me pleasure. Thank you so much...Smiles, Carol
Comment from misscookie
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I thought this little story was a cute one, Once again you put a smile n my face.Your world express the pure inocent of the young.
thisis a good write.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2010

reply by the author on 22-Apr-2010
    Cookie,

    Glad you enjoyed it...This one put a smile but I am afraid the nect one will not...It's sad. Smiles, Carol
reply by misscookie on 22-Apr-2010
    sock it to me!!!
Comment from sgalletti
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Hi Carol. Loved the humor in this piece. As they say: "Out of the mouths of babes..." Best of luck in this contest. You framed your dialogue extremely well...Sue

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2010

reply by the author on 22-Apr-2010
    Sue,

    Thanks for all the encouragement. Appreciated the kind comments. Carol
Comment from hotstuff
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OH, this story is so gorgeous. That last sentence is precious. I absolutely love this tale. I really do hope you do well with it in the competition as it speaks so well of human nature, characteristics and behaviours. It also highlights the innocence of childhood in a perfect way while reminding us that children understand so much because of their intelligence. Really good writing skills and imagination were displayed here.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2010

reply by the author on 22-Apr-2010
    Hotstuff,

    Wow..You really made me sit up and take notice of your comments...What terrific input and encouragement. Thank you so much for all the kindness. Smiles, Carol
Comment from laren
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This is a very nice and tender story which tell us about the innocence of a little girl. It's very well written and I really enjoyed it!
Congratulations!
Laren

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2010

reply by the author on 22-Apr-2010
    Laren,

    Thank you so much for the kind review. I hoped that BEth's innocence came across clearly. Thank you...Carol
reply by laren on 22-Apr-2010
    Reading your work was my pleasure, thank you for sharing.
    Laren