The Tears of God
a villanelle31 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
Your villanelle works so well because you have such a good ear for which lines should be the ones repeated. I also admired your pure rhymes, which connect all of your carefully chosen words into a distilled story of your ordeal.
This my last review of the evening--good night. -Joan
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reply by the author on 11-Jun-2009
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Your villanelle works so well because you have such a good ear for which lines should be the ones repeated. I also admired your pure rhymes, which connect all of your carefully chosen words into a distilled story of your ordeal.
This my last review of the evening--good night. -Joan
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Comment Written 11-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2009
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Thanks for a great review. I truly appreciate it. I see music in poetry, as you can tell.