CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 64 "In My Closet"A collection of poetry
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Comment from jaeladarling
Good style, flow, structure, imagery - the whole bit! You've got a good idea telling this from a fashionista point of view. LOL Nicely done - thanks for sharing and good luck!
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Good style, flow, structure, imagery - the whole bit! You've got a good idea telling this from a fashionista point of view. LOL Nicely done - thanks for sharing and good luck!
Comment Written 03-Feb-2009
Comment from MJMuraco
Nice poem and you always do a great job with imagery and rhythm. The artwork that you chose went well. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2009
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Nice poem and you always do a great job with imagery and rhythm. The artwork that you chose went well. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2009
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Thank you very much for your generous review and compliments. Glad you like the image, too. With regards, Sue
Comment from joan marie
What a great metaphor for holding on to the past. We all do it. It is hard to let go of things that meant so much once. Great write. joan marie
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What a great metaphor for holding on to the past. We all do it. It is hard to let go of things that meant so much once. Great write. joan marie
Comment Written 03-Feb-2009
Comment from J. Wrangler
Dear Sixteezkid,
Well done poem with the exact number of syllables in the style called for.
The choice of artwork was interesting too and your words are thought provoking.
I will have to look over the garments in my closet now to see which ones talk to me. ;~)
J
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2009
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Dear Sixteezkid,
Well done poem with the exact number of syllables in the style called for.
The choice of artwork was interesting too and your words are thought provoking.
I will have to look over the garments in my closet now to see which ones talk to me. ;~)
J
Comment Written 03-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2009
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You've not been paying attention to their speaking with you?? I'm puzzled. They can be so noisy at times! Ha! Thanks much for your great review. With regards, Sue
Comment from Judian James
Oh, I mentioned how we become cynics as we age in "About a Life"! So it's happening to you already? This is a great little piece. Not as innocent as it appears. Really causes some thought. well done
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2009
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Oh, I mentioned how we become cynics as we age in "About a Life"! So it's happening to you already? This is a great little piece. Not as innocent as it appears. Really causes some thought. well done
Comment Written 03-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2009
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Yes, you did write about it. And yes, I totally knew where you were coming from. Gets worse with age. Or is cynicism the truth revealed versus our naivete in youth? Hmmm..... I think the rhythm of the minute makes it sound more cutesy than it should. Ha! Thanks much for your review, Jude. :-) Sue
Comment from Jazh
This is an excellent poem for the contest. I can visualise this dress (I have one just like it!), and I enjoyed the wryness you use to describe it. Well done. :)
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reply by the author on 03-Feb-2009
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This is an excellent poem for the contest. I can visualise this dress (I have one just like it!), and I enjoyed the wryness you use to describe it. Well done. :)
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Comment Written 03-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2009
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Is it tattered and torn like my cynical dress? Ha! I have on my "trusting" slacks today. Thanks much for your great review. Always appreciated, Sue
