CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from joan marie
Asking for and receiving forgiveness is so important. Forgiving yourself is too. You are writing about some great topics. joan marie
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2009
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Asking for and receiving forgiveness is so important. Forgiving yourself is too. You are writing about some great topics. joan marie
Comment Written 30-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2009
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It's a daily thing we have to work on, yet so important, yes. Thanks so much for your lovely compliments, Joan.... Sue
Comment from FredCollingwood
And you try to tell us that you're new to this. This is great. You have some pretty impressive skill. thanks for sharing.
Fred
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And you try to tell us that you're new to this. This is great. You have some pretty impressive skill. thanks for sharing.
Fred
Comment Written 30-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2009
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Fred, I do love experimenting with new forms. And I'm loving these rics right now. Ha! I appreciate your compliments, Fred, on my work. Always appreciated, Sue :-))
Comment from Kingsland
this is another really well written poem that has a good meaning to its form and format.There is nothing for me to suggest for it.This was my pleasure to have read and reviewed it... John
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this is another really well written poem that has a good meaning to its form and format.There is nothing for me to suggest for it.This was my pleasure to have read and reviewed it... John
Comment Written 30-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2009
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John, thanks very much for your kind review and compliments. I always appreciate your reading my work. With regards, Sue
Comment from NightWriter
Bravo! "Penance" is another challenging, yet well written poem. The rictameter looks hard to do, but you make it look very easy. Well done. Bravo!
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Bravo! "Penance" is another challenging, yet well written poem. The rictameter looks hard to do, but you make it look very easy. Well done. Bravo!
Comment Written 30-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2009
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I have fallen in love with the ric! I really appreciate your lovely review and comments. Always appreciated, Sue
Comment from Roisin
Hi Sue,
This is another lovely rictameter. I love the subject and the poem flows beautifully. Your picture and presentation is beautiful too. These rictameters and the minute poems are my two favourites at the moment.
Warm regards.
Roisin
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2009
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Hi Sue,
This is another lovely rictameter. I love the subject and the poem flows beautifully. Your picture and presentation is beautiful too. These rictameters and the minute poems are my two favourites at the moment.
Warm regards.
Roisin
Comment Written 30-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2009
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Yeah, the rics and minute poems are great. I think I've been "sonnet-ed" out for at least a couple of days! HA! Thanks for the review....always appreciated, Sue :-))
Comment from adewpearl
Allowing the aggrieved comes out to 11 syllables each time I read it
Fespecting should be respecting
I like the message of your rictameter
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Allowing the aggrieved comes out to 11 syllables each time I read it
Fespecting should be respecting
I like the message of your rictameter
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Comment Written 30-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2009
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Jeez, Louise!! LOL!!! I took the word "the" out, making it 10 (and not necessary). Fespecting??? HA!!! Just letting you know these are changes so that I really DO deserve your 5! Thanks so much. Sue
Comment from Jazh
I enjoyed reading this poem, Sue. It has an excellent message, and you've conveyed it fluently. I thought a Rictameter had to have capitals at the beginning of each line, or does that vary? (Pardon my poetic ignorance!). Cheers. :)
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I enjoyed reading this poem, Sue. It has an excellent message, and you've conveyed it fluently. I thought a Rictameter had to have capitals at the beginning of each line, or does that vary? (Pardon my poetic ignorance!). Cheers. :)
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Comment Written 30-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2009
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Jazh, you crack me up. As soon as I post, you review while I'm half way into editing and getting it all set up. LOL!!! But thanks SO much for bringing it up. Yes, each line must be capitalized. It's all complete now. You're so fast on the draw! Thanks so much for your great review. :-)) Sue
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Yeah...Look out, I'm quick! Some would say pre-emptive. I wrote my rictameter thingy, never having written one before....fortunately I've had a few kind reviewers correcting. Maths was never my forte. :)
