CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 147 "Nuclear Family and the Divorce"A collection of poetry
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Comment from jamar2
I liked the way you have covered this subject,mixing the two has worked very well here, and has made for a enjoyable read, I think all of us who have been through a divorec will understand this only to well. well done my dear.
jamar.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2008
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I liked the way you have covered this subject,mixing the two has worked very well here, and has made for a enjoyable read, I think all of us who have been through a divorec will understand this only to well. well done my dear.
jamar.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2008
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Yes, if you've been through a divorce, I'm sure you can relate. Thank you so much for your very kind review and comments. With warmest regards, Sue
Comment from EllieKaye
Hello Sixteezkid,
You sure are a breath of fresh air for this Fanstory group.What I mean is that your poetry is quite unique. You have your own style, and it is quite noticeable.
The poem speaks loud and clear of the trauma of divorce, and its aftermath. For some, it is relief, but for many it is a scar inflicting wound of devastating proportions.
Very well done.
Ellie
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2008
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Hello Sixteezkid,
You sure are a breath of fresh air for this Fanstory group.What I mean is that your poetry is quite unique. You have your own style, and it is quite noticeable.
The poem speaks loud and clear of the trauma of divorce, and its aftermath. For some, it is relief, but for many it is a scar inflicting wound of devastating proportions.
Very well done.
Ellie
Comment Written 22-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2008
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Ellie, I am so humbled by your most kind remarks. As I am new at writing, to hear this, only encourages me to continue to write. I always knew that I had my own deep thoughts, but it never occurred to me that I could actually put a voice to them on paper. It is a great feeling. And now I am appreciating poetry in an entirely different light.
I most certainly appreciate your generous review and all your comments. My warmest regards, Sue
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Then you have a poet's heart and a natural gift. I am surprised you have only begun. That's neat.
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Comment from jack silver
well done. perfect flow and it was really enjoyable. i liked it so much i read it a lot more than once. you really have something here and i look forward to reading more.
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jack
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2008
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well done. perfect flow and it was really enjoyable. i liked it so much i read it a lot more than once. you really have something here and i look forward to reading more.
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jack
Comment Written 22-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2008
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Jack, thank you SO much for your great review and very encouraging words. So glad you liked this piece. And you read it more than once! You'll have to forgive my enthusiasm. Since I just started writing, it is GREAT to know that it resonates with others. My warmest regards, Sue
Comment from WordPainter
I can relate to this one. Excellent Ground Zero distance analogy! This stanza is beautiful:
And Beyond - Its name is Future
Not looking back,
We call it Fragile
Good work,
Lois
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2008
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I can relate to this one. Excellent Ground Zero distance analogy! This stanza is beautiful:
And Beyond - Its name is Future
Not looking back,
We call it Fragile
Good work,
Lois
Comment Written 22-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2008
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Lois, good to hear from you again. And thank you so much for your most kind review. And thanks for highlighting the stanza you liked! Most sincerely, Sue
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You're welcome Sue!
Lois
Comment from eraserlynch
Very clever poem and I enjoyed the message within your words and the analogy you used which was made so clear with your author note explanation. Look forward to reading more soon.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2008
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Very clever poem and I enjoyed the message within your words and the analogy you used which was made so clear with your author note explanation. Look forward to reading more soon.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2008
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So glad you liked this piece. Thank you very much for your most generous review and all your comments! Most sincerely, Sue
Comment from Perp Ihebom
This is a very beautiful analogy , comparing the devastation of a nuclear blast with that of a divorce. I really appreciate the clever work. I like the lines
self titled survivors growing sprigs
Breathing the dirty air
Great work. kudos
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2008
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This is a very beautiful analogy , comparing the devastation of a nuclear blast with that of a divorce. I really appreciate the clever work. I like the lines
self titled survivors growing sprigs
Breathing the dirty air
Great work. kudos
Comment Written 22-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2008
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Perp, thank you so much for your very generous review and specific comments. And thanks for highlighting the lines that you liked! So much appreciated.......With regards, Sue
Comment from amada
A witty and thoughtful metaphor in the sad event of divorce. It truly feels as a ground zero voltage of pain and disaster. I admire your creativity.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2008
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A witty and thoughtful metaphor in the sad event of divorce. It truly feels as a ground zero voltage of pain and disaster. I admire your creativity.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2008
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Thank you for your very kind words and review. Most sincerely, Sue
Comment from ulster3
Hello 6teez.
This is an exceptional idea to make such an adept comparison. The poem is excellent too. Divorce is highly priced indeed. No post trauma counseling, or critical incident stress debriefing either. fondly, rebecca
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2008
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Hello 6teez.
This is an exceptional idea to make such an adept comparison. The poem is excellent too. Divorce is highly priced indeed. No post trauma counseling, or critical incident stress debriefing either. fondly, rebecca
Comment Written 22-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2008
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Ulster, thank you very much for your most generous review and your comments. Yes, I fear that people believe that divorce is an "easy" option. Grass greener on the other side and all that. Obliteration comes to mind.
Much appreciated and with my warmest regards, Sue
Comment from cmay44
hi Sixteezkid
Thoroughly enjoyed your sad but true, well-written poem.
The analogy is super and you used good theme and your structure is quite good as well. Well done.
God bless you
love from
Carolyn
cmay44
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2008
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hi Sixteezkid
Thoroughly enjoyed your sad but true, well-written poem.
The analogy is super and you used good theme and your structure is quite good as well. Well done.
God bless you
love from
Carolyn
cmay44
Comment Written 22-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2008
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Carolyn, thank you so much for your generous review and your very specific comments! So glad you liked it. Much appreciated and with regards, Sue
Comment from Lois Delaney
Well, I'm going through just that. After forty-two years of marriage. It does feel like how you mentioned. Am I or the adult children healing yet? Not yet, I don't think. It's almost been a year. I think it will take eternity. Good write.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2008
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Well, I'm going through just that. After forty-two years of marriage. It does feel like how you mentioned. Am I or the adult children healing yet? Not yet, I don't think. It's almost been a year. I think it will take eternity. Good write.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2008
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I'm so sorry to hear that you and your family are going through this. It will not take an eternity for you to get through this. I am a walking testimony that we can move forward. Yes, initially, after the world has shaken, everyone has to adjust. Move away from the epicenter quickly, keep on with your talent and you will find how much you can enjoy "yourself". My warmest regards, Sue
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Thank you Sue. It's people like you who help me through day by day. Your words are so encouraging. Bless you.