Comment from kassey

Excellent

You may call it a pice of fluff, but it was thoroughly enjoyable, from start to finish i could feel the tongue in cheek attitude and sort of expected the ending. good poem Kay

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2008

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2008

Glad you enjoyed. Thanks for the generous review and encouraging comments. i appreciate you. ann

reply by the author on 09-Apr-2008

Glad you enjoyed. Thanks for the generous review and encouraging comments. i appreciate you. ann

Comment from glimmers

Excellent

Lol..how cute this is....
your poem flies us through your day in your wonderful rhyme and meter.....
love the repitition, love the though it invokes...well done,
take care, Gayle

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2008

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2008

thanks for a generous review and encouraging words. I appreciate. ann

Comment from Artasylum

Excellent

hum...drinking...i think your husband may help you do your best thinking and the drinking is his secret potion...he's a smart guy i must say...very cute...yours, diana

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2008

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2008

thanks for a generous review and nice comments. I appreciate. ann

Comment from earthlybeing

Excellent

Cute and well done. It flows well and is easy to re read and understand. I see nothing that would need to be edited. Thanks for sharing it. Jeanette

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2008

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2008

I appreciate your generous review and encouraging comments, ann

Comment from aviddbrut

Excellent

I love your rhyme scheme on this. very clever and witty piece. beginning and ending with "I do best thinkin'..." is great. some of the most interesting things I have written, (not necessarily the best stuff I have written) has been after a glass or two of vino. great job.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2008

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2008

I always find a glass of wine adds interest to my day! Thanks for the generous review and encouraging comments. ann

Comment from Paradox Tremors

Excellent

So sweet and nice. Written so true of what most people do each day. Nothing wrong relaxing having a glass or two - then off to bed for a little fun. Excellent. Enjoyed very much.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2008

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2008

Appreciate the generous review and kind comments. I do enjoy a glass of wine; seems to add to evening. ann

Comment from malachi1206

Excellent

I agree with the coffee although I'm more likely to end the day with coffee too good write well written and well constructed way to capture the average day wouldn't change anything malachi1206

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2008

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2008

I appreciate your generous review. Thanks for the encourage and support. ann

Comment from mariejames

Excellent

This is a cute, clever, fun little poem. It's well written. I like the style and format. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this one. Good work!

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2008

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2008

thanks for the generous review and kind comments. I appreciate it a lot. ann

Comment from Fish

Excellent

Nice bit of fluff! I enjoyed reading this after
having read five poems of religious angst
and bizarre disillusionment. I know how
it is to be dead tired after work and have
someone there to make everything bad
disappear. If only for a day. Nice poem. Fish

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2008

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2008

You made me laugh! lol. I agree. Some of the stuff I read leaves me searching for the wine bottle. Thanks for the generous review and kind comments. ann

Comment from Judian James

Excellent

This is so wonderful Ann! Oh, and can I identify! Yes, coffee for tea to get the old body going and then a couple of glasses of wine to slow the old body down! Just delightful. I love your rhyme scheme. It's one of my favorites. Excellent

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2008

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2008

Thanks! With a little help from my friends! I appreciate the encouragement and support. ann