How This Critter Crits
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Macro/Micro Critting"GROWTH? ADULATION? HURRY -- CHOOSE!
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Comment from LIJ Red
Do you realize you are pointing at the Achilles heel of the whole Fanstory idea?
That even the best reviewers have their own brains, complete with prejudices and bad moments, and agendas? I'm useless as a reviewer, except for catching a rare SPAG and poking fun at a total glaring lapse in logic, because I have no clue as to what the world wants. Looking at houses for sale sounds almost as fun as viewing family picture albums...or Facebook...
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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Do you realize you are pointing at the Achilles heel of the whole Fanstory idea?
That even the best reviewers have their own brains, complete with prejudices and bad moments, and agendas? I'm useless as a reviewer, except for catching a rare SPAG and poking fun at a total glaring lapse in logic, because I have no clue as to what the world wants. Looking at houses for sale sounds almost as fun as viewing family picture albums...or Facebook...
Comment Written 27-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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Not far removed from facebook or family picture albums. Now you can go on line and wander through homes for sale. It's just not the same, though. Thanks, Red. Appreciate.
Comment from Drew Delaney
Very good, Jay. So you would leave the love of your life in a house with strangers knowing she is wondering where you are and why did you just disappear like that. Jay, Jay. It's lucky for you she is sticking with you just looking at houses. LOL
Good job writing or editing this one. I don't like to call this reviewing either. I prefer commenting as to what I do. Reading and giving my comments. Drew
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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Very good, Jay. So you would leave the love of your life in a house with strangers knowing she is wondering where you are and why did you just disappear like that. Jay, Jay. It's lucky for you she is sticking with you just looking at houses. LOL
Good job writing or editing this one. I don't like to call this reviewing either. I prefer commenting as to what I do. Reading and giving my comments. Drew
Comment Written 26-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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Hahaha, I knew someone would take the woman's point of view. Lol, thanks, Drew. I'm so glad to have you on this adventure.
Comment from Spitfire
You bring up so many good points here, Jay. Mindset is really important. Earlier today, I started to review, then realized how exhausted I was and watched a Netflix movie ironically named "Pierrepont: the Last Hangman." Now, with a cup of hot chocolate at hand, I'm in the mood.
I love the analogy of house hunting and the description of its location. Also:Still and all, the house, itself, has good structure, good bones. Its stucco finish has been painted a pale yellow, with a brighter yellow framing the windows and the eaves. Nothing screams out, "Look at me! Look at me!"-- This guide should be used when reviewing.
Good point about novels although some are easier to pick up in the middle. Each chapter should really be a beat in itself.
Love your breezy style.
We think much the same way. :-)
Shari
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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You bring up so many good points here, Jay. Mindset is really important. Earlier today, I started to review, then realized how exhausted I was and watched a Netflix movie ironically named "Pierrepont: the Last Hangman." Now, with a cup of hot chocolate at hand, I'm in the mood.
I love the analogy of house hunting and the description of its location. Also:Still and all, the house, itself, has good structure, good bones. Its stucco finish has been painted a pale yellow, with a brighter yellow framing the windows and the eaves. Nothing screams out, "Look at me! Look at me!"-- This guide should be used when reviewing.
Good point about novels although some are easier to pick up in the middle. Each chapter should really be a beat in itself.
Love your breezy style.
We think much the same way. :-)
Shari
Comment Written 26-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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Ah, Shari (I think I've been spelling it Sheri), I'm gratified you feel we share something creatively. You have more organization to your thought processes, though. I'm guessing, of course, but I'm scattered and it takes me a while to get to the same place I'd have arrived at sooner by sitting back and doing some planning. I'm talking about my writing, now, and not so much the critting process (which would be in direct contradiction to what I professed in the post). Ah, my! Shari, thanks for the 6 stars. Coming from you, it honored my efforts.
Comment from chasennov
Circumnavigating and Sizing up the Neighborhood How This Critter Crits Macro/Micro Critting.' I yet again enjoyed this critting business of yours, Jay. Having read every word your thoughts have put into this work, I'm not so sure I want to even read the next posting at all. It sounds painfully difficult the way you expanded on it. Well done.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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Circumnavigating and Sizing up the Neighborhood How This Critter Crits Macro/Micro Critting.' I yet again enjoyed this critting business of yours, Jay. Having read every word your thoughts have put into this work, I'm not so sure I want to even read the next posting at all. It sounds painfully difficult the way you expanded on it. Well done.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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Trust me, Chas. Nothing profound or difficult. Just the mundane wrapped about with humor. So I hope you'll be there.
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Sure thing. I almost worried.
Comment from kiwijenny
Ok Jay I've done it..I've gone for the haiku and short poems to score my member pump...I don't just choose prose but I do like to read longer pieces and fantasy genre
Well penned great metaphor of open houses
God bless
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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Ok Jay I've done it..I've gone for the haiku and short poems to score my member pump...I don't just choose prose but I do like to read longer pieces and fantasy genre
Well penned great metaphor of open houses
God bless
Comment Written 26-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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The last place I go is the Haiku. I can't find enough to sink my teeth in and come up with the minimum required words. Thanks for your kind words and rating.
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Jay...
Well this was a kick in the pants chapter. We love to hit open houses too. It's fun when you know you're not going to buy, so you an be as critical as you want and it's okay.
It's too bad they don't offer more money for chapters and short stories, which is why the poems have a large volume of readers. Really need to have some changes there.
Of course, if I like a story enough, I'll read it for 2 cents----but I have to really like it.
Fun chapter.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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Hi, Jay...
Well this was a kick in the pants chapter. We love to hit open houses too. It's fun when you know you're not going to buy, so you an be as critical as you want and it's okay.
It's too bad they don't offer more money for chapters and short stories, which is why the poems have a large volume of readers. Really need to have some changes there.
Of course, if I like a story enough, I'll read it for 2 cents----but I have to really like it.
Fun chapter.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)
Comment Written 26-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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I am a FanStory Materialist. I won't read an unpromoted post unless I get it for the 50 percent. I don't have time for it. If they want it read, they should promote.
Comment from alf collier
Hi Jay. This was a great read!! Do you still go house-looking? or did some dream home sweep you and your wife from your feet, gaining that much sought six star rating??? Anyhow, am looking forward to the next post, alf
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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Hi Jay. This was a great read!! Do you still go house-looking? or did some dream home sweep you and your wife from your feet, gaining that much sought six star rating??? Anyhow, am looking forward to the next post, alf
Comment Written 26-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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No, we could never afford to move up from what we own, so it was just dream-spinning. Thanks for your kindness, Alf. I appreciate your reading.
Comment from boxergirl
Clever writing Jay. I really liked the comparisons between choosing open houses and crittin. They do share some of the same deliemas. Love the humorous tone throughout!
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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Clever writing Jay. I really liked the comparisons between choosing open houses and crittin. They do share some of the same deliemas. Love the humorous tone throughout!
Comment Written 26-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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Thank you, Karen. I'm glad you caught the extended metaphor and found it effective. Humor's a good thing. Wasn't it Teddy Roosevelt who said, "Speak softly, and carry a funny stick?"
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Hi Jay! Congrats on the macro/micro critts and the awards. Well deserved writing with lots of humor. We like to look at model houses. Some builders decorate with soft color and others bright and bold decorations. I always like the ones that give out cookies. After awhile, the builders have their own style. Some writers are in all the contests and are very hard to beat in this writing race. Oh well, Michael is an excellent and creative author.
Thank you Jay, so spending your coffee energy and thoughts with me on a Saturday afternoon. I'm sure that the lawn might need mowing or the car needs gas. Maybe, you and Roseana like to go driving and look at the scenery. Ok, so thank you, again for the excellent reviews. I am working on my verbs. Brooke, has me aware of commas.
In May, this will be a year on FS. Keep warm, enjoy your pot of coffee. I will hang out in your portfolio again. Thank you for being an awesome fan and friend! You are a star of a guy. flylikeaneagle
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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Hi Jay! Congrats on the macro/micro critts and the awards. Well deserved writing with lots of humor. We like to look at model houses. Some builders decorate with soft color and others bright and bold decorations. I always like the ones that give out cookies. After awhile, the builders have their own style. Some writers are in all the contests and are very hard to beat in this writing race. Oh well, Michael is an excellent and creative author.
Thank you Jay, so spending your coffee energy and thoughts with me on a Saturday afternoon. I'm sure that the lawn might need mowing or the car needs gas. Maybe, you and Roseana like to go driving and look at the scenery. Ok, so thank you, again for the excellent reviews. I am working on my verbs. Brooke, has me aware of commas.
In May, this will be a year on FS. Keep warm, enjoy your pot of coffee. I will hang out in your portfolio again. Thank you for being an awesome fan and friend! You are a star of a guy. flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 26-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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Thank you so much, Nancy. I'm thrilled you enjoyed this chapter. People seem to like the extended metaphor. You are a joy to have reading my posts. So upbeat and encouraging.
Comment from Delahay
O.k., I'll wait until you re-post your next chapter. I haven't seen you wife though. Think she gave up and went home? I have run into your dilemma about reading and reviewing certain poems and chapters. I mostly pass up the spiritual writing because I can't relate. I also mostly read stand alone prose and not story chapters because I don't want to start in the middle of a book. That is why poems are easier to read and review but I do like to see what else is available at times.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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O.k., I'll wait until you re-post your next chapter. I haven't seen you wife though. Think she gave up and went home? I have run into your dilemma about reading and reviewing certain poems and chapters. I mostly pass up the spiritual writing because I can't relate. I also mostly read stand alone prose and not story chapters because I don't want to start in the middle of a book. That is why poems are easier to read and review but I do like to see what else is available at times.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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The problem with books on FS is the same for the writer as for the reader. And the answer will be coming up (I believe next time). Thanks for sampling some of my stuff, though, and for your kind words and super rating.