Tattered Vision
For the cloth can never be whole . . .32 total reviews
Comment from shad blunt
May the veil always be lifted when we see new light ahead to shine down upon our feet that shall lead the way. Looking forward to reading more of your works soon. Sunny days to come. Shadrach
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
May the veil always be lifted when we see new light ahead to shine down upon our feet that shall lead the way. Looking forward to reading more of your works soon. Sunny days to come. Shadrach
Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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Thanx for your review on this one, Shadrach, and good to see your name again! Kinda busy round here with Christmas and work, but so good to take time for 'the pen'... kindof a refuge sometimes! ;) Take care and Merry Christmas! ;)
Comment from Debbie Pope
Once again, your post is so creative and interesting. I've not read any other 2-4-2 quite like it. I like your discussion as well. I think your poems come to you like bright shards, breaking through the hum drum thoughts. Personally, I think I put up too many of those veils.
Well done, my friend.
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reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
Once again, your post is so creative and interesting. I've not read any other 2-4-2 quite like it. I like your discussion as well. I think your poems come to you like bright shards, breaking through the hum drum thoughts. Personally, I think I put up too many of those veils.
Well done, my friend.
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Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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Thanx so much for the review here, Lady Deb, and so sorry I'm behind on these... long hours at work and lots to do to get ready for the boys... Christmas isn't the same as 'of old' but I make it fun for us!! Take care and Merry Christmas, Beautiful Friend! ;) Yvette
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Have a sweet Christmas. I bet you make it fun