Hummingbirds
Watching the hummingbirds and their antics34 total reviews
Comment from Nicki.B
Cecilia this is really beautiful. I have always been amazing at hummingbird since I learned about them in school many years ago. What a gorgeous bird they are and you have captured this lovely with the story within. How they flutter around so beautifully and leave for winter and you look forward to their return. Well done, I enjoyed it along with your graphical image that can move haha! I would love to know how to do that, are there instruction on the site may I ask?
Best Wishes
Nicki
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
Cecilia this is really beautiful. I have always been amazing at hummingbird since I learned about them in school many years ago. What a gorgeous bird they are and you have captured this lovely with the story within. How they flutter around so beautifully and leave for winter and you look forward to their return. Well done, I enjoyed it along with your graphical image that can move haha! I would love to know how to do that, are there instruction on the site may I ask?
Best Wishes
Nicki
Comment Written 17-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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Hi Nicki,
Thank you for the kind review. I am technically challenge and I don't know how to make the hummingbird move. It was on Fanstory's artwork sight :)
Cecilia
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Haha! It's so nice! I never think to look into the fanstory art, don't ask me why, I'm going to start, thanks for letting me know those graphics are available!
Nicki xox
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You're welcome and thank you for becoming a fan.
Cecilia
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We don't have hummingbirds in the UK and they are such amazing birds and I would love to see one for real. Your poem brings their antics to life here Cecilia and I enjoyed your quaint story.
Just a couple of spelling issues here:
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Line 24:
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A magical post, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
We don't have hummingbirds in the UK and they are such amazing birds and I would love to see one for real. Your poem brings their antics to life here Cecilia and I enjoyed your quaint story.
Just a couple of spelling issues here:
Line 8:
(backwards)
Line 24:
(forward)
A magical post, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 17-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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Hi Dolly,
Thank you for the kind review. I imagine it might be to cold in the UK for them. I will get those errors taken care of right now.
Cecilia
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I am a nature lover too, and this poem was a delight. The humming bird is so graceful as it feeds from the nectar of the flowers. This is very well written, I very much enjoyed it. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
I am a nature lover too, and this poem was a delight. The humming bird is so graceful as it feeds from the nectar of the flowers. This is very well written, I very much enjoyed it. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 17-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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Sandra,
Thank you for the kind review. Nature is always fun for me to write. I wrote a poem about and owl "Night Watcher" and another one about "coyotes" These kind of poems get my brain flowing.
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I can understand that completely! xx
Comment from Regina Elliott
What a beauteous bird loving
poem, dear poet. My son-in-law is a bird lover like my
daughter and I. He has put up
several bird houses and feeders. Our wild backyard
birds love it. We have a hummingbird feeder too.
Sometimes they hover around
us. Lovely nature poem, have
a blessed Sunday.
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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
What a beauteous bird loving
poem, dear poet. My son-in-law is a bird lover like my
daughter and I. He has put up
several bird houses and feeders. Our wild backyard
birds love it. We have a hummingbird feeder too.
Sometimes they hover around
us. Lovely nature poem, have
a blessed Sunday.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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Regina,
Thank you for the kind review. I love writing about wild life. I have two other poems I wrote, "Night Watcher" and "coyotes" I get my ideas from listing to the wild life at night.
Cecilia