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Viewing comments for Chapter 38 "Lyenochka's Version"Two very real women in not so real situation.
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Comment from Begin Again
What a blast, Helen! You saw more of the FS friends than I did, but I didn't get there till the end. I'm more of an event planner than an event attendee. I probably would have founded you on the sidelines after Wendy and I returned from walking Sunny on the beach. I loved how you touched on all the different sides of us and how we can blend together as friends if we try. Well done!
Smiles and hugs, Carol
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
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What a blast, Helen! You saw more of the FS friends than I did, but I didn't get there till the end. I'm more of an event planner than an event attendee. I probably would have founded you on the sidelines after Wendy and I returned from walking Sunny on the beach. I loved how you touched on all the different sides of us and how we can blend together as friends if we try. Well done!
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
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Yes, we can blend peacefully, I'm sure of it! But you made sure that the problem character was taken care of! Congratulations on your win! Thanks for reviewing mine! Hugs!
Comment from Pearl Edwards
You didn't miss too many out in your convention party, Helen, even Michael and Dean made a brief appearance. . I loved the ending of this one, when quiet reined as they got their phones out and their fingers typing. Very entertaining Helen,
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
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You didn't miss too many out in your convention party, Helen, even Michael and Dean made a brief appearance. . I loved the ending of this one, when quiet reined as they got their phones out and their fingers typing. Very entertaining Helen,
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
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I thought remembering our old friends who left us -sigh- would be a way of bringing us all more together. Thanks so much, Valda! Hugs!
Comment from Sanku
OH Helen! This is incredible.You know so many f fanstory members and you have included all of them in the party .This must have taken a lot of effort. You even included those who have left like Dean KUCH and Michael Cahill.. And ending with a musical treat which had to be stopped by Mr ENS...Thank you for including me..
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
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OH Helen! This is incredible.You know so many f fanstory members and you have included all of them in the party .This must have taken a lot of effort. You even included those who have left like Dean KUCH and Michael Cahill.. And ending with a musical treat which had to be stopped by Mr ENS...Thank you for including me..
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
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Of course, I must include you! I enjoy our chats not related to FS. Thanks so much for the super review and rating, Santha! Hugs!
Comment from l.raven
Hi Helen, OMG my caring friend...I read your
FanStory reunion...and I laughed and cried...
this is just amazing...I read it twice...memories
of friends that have come...and those that have left...
I loved all the activities done...you pin pointed everyone
out perfect...passed and still with us...right down to Tom
reminding people their daily post needed to be posted...
this took a lot of time...and work...and you did an awesome
job...I so enjoyed reading it...
so very well written my wonderful friend...and your picture...
PERFECT...I love the story told...God Bless...love much...Linda xxoo
I don't know if you got my last email...the one I sent Sandra went
to her spam...xxoo
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
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Hi Helen, OMG my caring friend...I read your
FanStory reunion...and I laughed and cried...
this is just amazing...I read it twice...memories
of friends that have come...and those that have left...
I loved all the activities done...you pin pointed everyone
out perfect...passed and still with us...right down to Tom
reminding people their daily post needed to be posted...
this took a lot of time...and work...and you did an awesome
job...I so enjoyed reading it...
so very well written my wonderful friend...and your picture...
PERFECT...I love the story told...God Bless...love much...Linda xxoo
I don't know if you got my last email...the one I sent Sandra went
to her spam...xxoo
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
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Thanks again, dear Linda! Appreciate the super comments and rating! I wish we could have a portal to talk with all the friends who have gone to heaven like Dean, Michael, Gert, Jannypan. I learned so much from Phyllis! Hugs and blessings and continued prayers!
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your so welcome my caring friend...
there are so many I remember...
Robina 1978 (Ine) 2011
Reconciled ( Michael) 2011
Gungalo (Pam) 2009
adewpearl ( Brooke) 2008
Nancy e davis 2012
Joan E. 2008
Margaret Snowdon ( 2011)
Crzpnter (August) 2013
Chey 2008
Mastery ( Bob) 2004
Miss Cookie ( 2009)
RP Saxena ( 2013)
I am heart broken...RP was one
of my favorite writers...and I went to his profile...and saw an eternal flame...
I cried...
and all of those you remembered...
I remembered as well...
it's so hard to think about so many passed...and so many more I didn't
name...
I try to picture them all meeting in
Heaven...in the Hall of FanStory
Fame...
like you I wish we had a portal to
talk to all our FanStory friends passed...
Hugs and Prayers to you too beautiful
girl...much love to you...xxoo 🙏🙏🤗❤️🌼
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Oh wow, you should write post to remember these friends. You know so many more than I do. You put down their starting year at FS. I wonder how many others remember them. I miss Joan E, too! But a lot on your list were not here when I joined. Thanks for listing them! 💖
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I miss Joan as well...she loved to
travel...and I told her I packed my
suit case and I was ready...she would
send me pictures...like I was there...
we joked about it...
our so very welcome...love ya...xxoo
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Oh that's so sweet!
She had her cancer treatment at the same time my husband did. I was so sad she didn't make it. And then her husband immediately married again. That made me a little sad, too. But I guess at our senior age, one can't wait too long.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
No wonder I didn't spot you at the party Helen as you were wearing an invisible cloak. I hope you didn't leave anyone out here as you have probably mentioned the entire cast of Fanstory in this post, organising them into suitable groups! You made me smile with your humour and unique stories and I am glad you were able to attend this function and bring the scene to life with your excellent tale, much enjoyed, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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No wonder I didn't spot you at the party Helen as you were wearing an invisible cloak. I hope you didn't leave anyone out here as you have probably mentioned the entire cast of Fanstory in this post, organising them into suitable groups! You made me smile with your humour and unique stories and I am glad you were able to attend this function and bring the scene to life with your excellent tale, much enjoyed, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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Thanks so much, Dolly! I had to give it a try. I know I must have missed some! Mostly, I didn't want our less prolific writers to be overlooked.
Hugs!
Comment from Wendy G
A fun and humorous piece of writing. You show here how well you are acquainted with a huge number of FanStorians, along with their interests and writing specialities. And the song of blessing is beautiful. I enjoyed the climax with Tom's announcement.
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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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A fun and humorous piece of writing. You show here how well you are acquainted with a huge number of FanStorians, along with their interests and writing specialities. And the song of blessing is beautiful. I enjoyed the climax with Tom's announcement.
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Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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Do you play that song in your church? When our six friends visited, they wanted to attend our church because we told them so much about it. And the final song was that and so we decided we'll sing it over our families for forty days. Thanks for reviewing, Wendy! Hugs!
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We have it at times, but not often- it's a beautiful benediction.
Comment from Jasmine Girl
Haha. You are the only one who wrote about me in the party. I really appreciate it. You are a true friend. It looks like fun. Your hiding behind the invisibility cloak helped you to observe undisturbed. So shrud.
Well done.
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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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Haha. You are the only one who wrote about me in the party. I really appreciate it. You are a true friend. It looks like fun. Your hiding behind the invisibility cloak helped you to observe undisturbed. So shrud.
Well done.
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Comment Written 31-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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Thanks, Lisa! I wanted to hide because I do not like big parties and I'd rather be listening and not interacting if possible.
Hugs!
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I want to write one, too now after reading a few. I want to write a crazy one.
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You can do it! But the contest part is over so you can just do it as a separate short story post.
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Didn't know it's a contest. Thanks for letting me know.
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It was an unofficial contest which Rachelle created. If you look up Rachelle Allen, she gave us directions:
https://www.fanstory.com/displaystory.jsp?id=1139627