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Comment from Tom Horonzy
Well, you have reset the stage with two dozen characters, most familiar names. I cannot imagine what comes next after all the Dom is drained. Romance on the terrace?
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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Well, you have reset the stage with two dozen characters, most familiar names. I cannot imagine what comes next after all the Dom is drained. Romance on the terrace?
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Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Yeah, right. Mass orgy!!
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How is Jeannie going to fit in? Or have I gone astray again in regards to who is the Amish gal?
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The Amish girl is Rebekah, and she is back in Long Island getting one-on-one opera education by my friend and former student Maria, who runs a music school.
Comment from Wayne Fowler
What do you mean 'pretended' that the TV remote was a ray gun?????????????? Didn't you see all the people momentarily freeze when I zapped them?
I can't believe you brought obnoxious Jane back into the story!
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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What do you mean 'pretended' that the TV remote was a ray gun?????????????? Didn't you see all the people momentarily freeze when I zapped them?
I can't believe you brought obnoxious Jane back into the story!
Best wishes.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Well, wasn't it all going way too well? There's ALWAYS a price to pay when that happens!! Who doesn't know that, Wayne! Come onnnn!!!
xoxoxo
Comment from royowen
I think you did a bang up job of, and yes, you didn't pull any punches, and no, you didn't take any liberties, I turned up with what I said, and you had a crosssection of writers, very popular ones too, I loved it, well done, you looked like you had a good time, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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I think you did a bang up job of, and yes, you didn't pull any punches, and no, you didn't take any liberties, I turned up with what I said, and you had a crosssection of writers, very popular ones too, I loved it, well done, you looked like you had a good time, blessings Roy
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Such an unbelievably good time!! Best time I ever had writing a story, actually. So glad you were part of it, Roy. Thank you. xoxox
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Bless you Rachelle.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
That Jane is an entitled little bitch, isn't she?
Do you mean to tell us that you WEREN'T wearing your silk gloves and diamond tiara? I'm shocked!
I'm trying to work my way around, "savor the bubbles as they lap dance their way down the hatch." Hehehe:-)
I love Wayne in a ball cap with the pretend ray gun - that's awesome:-)
Wendy G. - you go, girl! I took you for someone as shy as Gretchen.
Good lord, I sound like Jane, lol! You have issues, Allen.
I can only imagine what a joy it was for you to write this, my friend. The only thing better than writing it would be to live it. Let me know where and when.
My goodness, you've taken this to a whole new level with the "write your own chapter" creation. I'm looking forward to reading some of those myself.
You guys have outdone yourselves now!
xoxo
Pam
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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That Jane is an entitled little bitch, isn't she?
Do you mean to tell us that you WEREN'T wearing your silk gloves and diamond tiara? I'm shocked!
I'm trying to work my way around, "savor the bubbles as they lap dance their way down the hatch." Hehehe:-)
I love Wayne in a ball cap with the pretend ray gun - that's awesome:-)
Wendy G. - you go, girl! I took you for someone as shy as Gretchen.
Good lord, I sound like Jane, lol! You have issues, Allen.
I can only imagine what a joy it was for you to write this, my friend. The only thing better than writing it would be to live it. Let me know where and when.
My goodness, you've taken this to a whole new level with the "write your own chapter" creation. I'm looking forward to reading some of those myself.
You guys have outdone yourselves now!
xoxo
Pam
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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We're unstoppable now! Gangway!!!
This was a terrific review, as yours always are. Thank you sincerely for having been one of the super-supporters since Chapter One. xoxox
Comment from Jacob1395
The convention certainly does seem to be getting underway. I love how you manage to bring everyone's personalities to life in this chapter and I could really picture it in my mind as I was reading, and you definitely made me laugh. Another excellent chapter. I enjoyed reading it.
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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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The convention certainly does seem to be getting underway. I love how you manage to bring everyone's personalities to life in this chapter and I could really picture it in my mind as I was reading, and you definitely made me laugh. Another excellent chapter. I enjoyed reading it.
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Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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And just WAIT until you read Gretchen's. She'll be take it to a whole new level!! Thank you for this lovely review and also for having been with us throughout the entire endeavor. xoxox Very much appreciated.
Comment from Wendy G
Six! Of course a SIX! How could you receive anything less!? A fun and well-written chapter, and you must have been dying for today to come so you could post it!!! What a truly fabulous chapter (and of COURSE Jane Babies had to find her way in to the event!)
Wendy
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Six! Of course a SIX! How could you receive anything less!? A fun and well-written chapter, and you must have been dying for today to come so you could post it!!! What a truly fabulous chapter (and of COURSE Jane Babies had to find her way in to the event!)
Wendy
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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OF COURRRRRRRRSE!!
You're absolutely right; I could not WAIT to post this, and Gretchen has been feeling the same way about HER chapter, too!!
Thanks for the first six. I couldn't appreciate it more.
xoxoxoxo
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I can't wait to read Gretchen's post. And then think about my little story. This has been an extraordinary journey- such fun reading this collaboration.
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And just one more chapter to go of Gretchen's and mine. It's been the BEST time!