Patch and Ruby
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Patch and Ruby Plan a BD Party"Patch is Helen's cat and Ruby is Kenzie's cat
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Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A delightful feline romp here, Debi! And the start of a book with these fun and mischievous characters. Actually, I'm not sure who had more fun - the cats or you because your imagination was working overtime with your newly invented portmanteau? terms (I think you'll have to collate into another book). Wonderful picture too! Well done! Love Debbie
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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A delightful feline romp here, Debi! And the start of a book with these fun and mischievous characters. Actually, I'm not sure who had more fun - the cats or you because your imagination was working overtime with your newly invented portmanteau? terms (I think you'll have to collate into another book). Wonderful picture too! Well done! Love Debbie
Comment Written 13-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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Thanks Debbie, but if you look, the reason I put these in a book is because this is not new. This is the 4th poem I have written for them so I thought I should keep them together in a book. Thanks for the very sweet comments and compliments. I appreciate it so very much, my dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Patch and Ruby Plan a Birthday Party, presented with seven AABB-rhymed quatrains, create quite the celebration with enough cat puns to last nine lives.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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This poem, Patch and Ruby Plan a Birthday Party, presented with seven AABB-rhymed quatrains, create quite the celebration with enough cat puns to last nine lives.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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Hi Bill, thanks so much for such a kind review and comments for my fourth poem of these two silly cats. I appreciate you having some fun with me.
Love, Debi
Comment from Sanku
And what a party! with bouncers and all .It is sad that meowgaritas and wisk-eys were banned .But still they had good fun andTheir missus too had a good laugh...Very funny .
FROm a cat lover
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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And what a party! with bouncers and all .It is sad that meowgaritas and wisk-eys were banned .But still they had good fun andTheir missus too had a good laugh...Very funny .
FROm a cat lover
Comment Written 13-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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Haha, would you please read this again and tell me what you think?
The one line said, "whiskey sour puss fought" was too much of a mouthful so I redid those lines. LOL, the margarita is my favorite drink so the meowgaritas got to stay. I needed someone to say something so thank you so much.
And thank you for looking again. Love ya, Sweetie. Debi
Comment from Sally Law
Debi dear,
This is just too much for an early Sunday morning! I especially love the word play in this one. Wisk-ey sour! Too much. Ruby, Patch and Catzilla know how to have a Fur-Ball. Hahahaha! Oh my, it's infectious!
A delight, beautifully crated and presented. A six it is!
Sending you my best today as always and Love & Blessings abundant.
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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Debi dear,
This is just too much for an early Sunday morning! I especially love the word play in this one. Wisk-ey sour! Too much. Ruby, Patch and Catzilla know how to have a Fur-Ball. Hahahaha! Oh my, it's infectious!
A delight, beautifully crated and presented. A six it is!
Sending you my best today as always and Love & Blessings abundant.
Sal XOs
Comment Written 13-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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Dearest Sally.,you are absolutely a gem. Thank you so much for the most fun review and fun comments. Also thank you for the generous six stars for my silly cat poem. I put it in a book now so maybe I can keep adding to them. Thank you again, my awesome friend. Much love, and hugs, Debi
Comment from Begin Again
This was so adorable and a joy to read, Debi! It flowed so well and I could imagine all the kitty action. A illustrated book would simply amaze the children. Well done!
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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This was so adorable and a joy to read, Debi! It flowed so well and I could imagine all the kitty action. A illustrated book would simply amaze the children. Well done!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 13-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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My dearest Carol, you are absolutely a gem. Thank you so much for the most fun review and fun comments. Also thank you for the generous six stars for my silly cat poem. I put it in a book now so maybe I can keep adding to them. Thank you again, my awesome friend. Much love, and hugs, Debi
Comment from jmdg1954
Seems like the paw-ring of alcohol is what did them kitty kats in. Though they could have scratched and clawed there way to a victorious party they were escorted from the premises.
Cute story which gave me a smile early this morning.
Love ya.
John
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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Seems like the paw-ring of alcohol is what did them kitty kats in. Though they could have scratched and clawed there way to a victorious party they were escorted from the premises.
Cute story which gave me a smile early this morning.
Love ya.
John
Comment Written 13-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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Hi John, thanks so much. You are always so kind and I do appreciate you having some fun with me on this one. I did change it and it reads better, however, whisk-E Sour Puss got plowed and he was intoxicat.
LOL..thanks and it is good to see you. Do you have anything planned in the near future to write. I just want to make sure I don't miss anything.
So thanks my sweet bro. You're appreciated nice than you know.
Love, Debi
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I have a couple of stories rummaging in my head, but I just haven't been in the mood to write. I really can't explain the reason, I guess I'm just on a down swing waiting for the upswing. Hopeful it'll be soon.
In the meantime, I'm content reading posts from my favorite writers...
Thanks for caring, you know I love ya!
Comment from Nicki.B
This is such a fun cat poem! What a a party Debi lol! I love meowgaritas! Sounds like a party I'd like an invite too, just my kind of party! Well done, image is great to compliment the poem.
Best Wishes
Nicki xxx
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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This is such a fun cat poem! What a a party Debi lol! I love meowgaritas! Sounds like a party I'd like an invite too, just my kind of party! Well done, image is great to compliment the poem.
Best Wishes
Nicki xxx
Comment Written 13-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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Hey Nicki, thanks so much for such a sweet review and comments for my fourth poem of these two silly cats. I appreciate you having some fun with me.
Love, Debi
Comment from royowen
I like this poem Debi, a credit to you lover, you have grown exponentially, and you stand as the lover of mankind as Christ is the lover of all souls, because He died for mankind, and although this is about the cats of members, it still reveals your heart Debi, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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I like this poem Debi, a credit to you lover, you have grown exponentially, and you stand as the lover of mankind as Christ is the lover of all souls, because He died for mankind, and although this is about the cats of members, it still reveals your heart Debi, blessings Roy
Comment Written 13-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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Hi Roy, thanks so much for such a sweet review and comments for my fourth poem of these two silly cats. You always say the nicest things and I also appreciate you having some fun with me.
Love, Debi
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Bless you Debi
Comment from l.raven
Hi Debi, Catzilla...leave it to Sally...
I knew you were talking about Helen's
cat Patch...but not your granddaughters
cat Ruby...
I had to laugh at your story told...they sounded
like they were having a blast...getting down and funky...
but I must say...you never miss a birthday...be it
animal or humans...LOL...
I love your poem my beautiful friend...will put me on
the path of sweet dreams...very well done you...
and the just says it all...love much...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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Hi Debi, Catzilla...leave it to Sally...
I knew you were talking about Helen's
cat Patch...but not your granddaughters
cat Ruby...
I had to laugh at your story told...they sounded
like they were having a blast...getting down and funky...
but I must say...you never miss a birthday...be it
animal or humans...LOL...
I love your poem my beautiful friend...will put me on
the path of sweet dreams...very well done you...
and the just says it all...love much...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 13-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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Hi Linda, thanks so much for such a sweet review and comments for my fourth poem of these two silly cats. I appreciate you having some fun with me. And yes, we included Catzilla for this one, but not sure about further ones. Thank you again, my dear friend.
Love, Debi
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always welcome you...I try to catch up
when I can...winter is better for me
because on snowy days...I'm stuck in the house...and I can relax back and read...love you beautiful girl...xxoo 🤗❤️🙏🌼
Comment from karenina
Oh, my brain ought to be in pickle juice! I'd forgotten this was in book form!
I was thinking it'd be adorable if Helen and Sally added their "kitty" poem chapters too...
That's a book for another time, I guess!
Nice AABB rhyme and wicked clever play on words--
(meowgaritas is adorable)
A fun read and great image!
Karenina
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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Oh, my brain ought to be in pickle juice! I'd forgotten this was in book form!
I was thinking it'd be adorable if Helen and Sally added their "kitty" poem chapters too...
That's a book for another time, I guess!
Nice AABB rhyme and wicked clever play on words--
(meowgaritas is adorable)
A fun read and great image!
Karenina
Comment Written 13-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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No, this is a book and is the fourth chapter of only mine. I will periodically add to it when I get the urge for something fun like I did yesterday. I swear my mental health needs it lately. LOL.
Thanks for all your sweet comments about it. It got better after you read it, as I always change stuff after I post. Anyway thank you again, my lovely friend.
Love, Debi
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Oh! Duh...
You know my time and attention are fractured! Sorry I missed that.