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Two very real women in not so real situation.

30 total reviews 
Comment from Jessica Wheeler
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Hahah! Yesss! This killed me...
"When we get to the convention," I tell her, "the first person I want you to meet is Lancellot."
This baby Jane, whew! I can actually HEAR her voooice!
Hilarious addition. I am excited for the next!
Xoxo
Jess

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
    Thank you for picking up on that!! That was one of my favorite lines!!!! Of course you would be the one to bring it up, Miss Fun!

    I appreciate this wonderful review. Thank you, Jess. xoxo