Fifty Word Flash!
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
LOL I have a very similar conversation with Harley last evening. He stole the cats' food dish. He sure did. I told him to drop it. He did, but then picked it up again. This was repeated four times, before he realized, Mom's serious. LOL I enjoyed reading and wish you luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2024
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LOL I have a very similar conversation with Harley last evening. He stole the cats' food dish. He sure did. I told him to drop it. He did, but then picked it up again. This was repeated four times, before he realized, Mom's serious. LOL I enjoyed reading and wish you luck with the contest.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2024
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I'm laughing...but I id cover my mouth in case Harley was watching. How adorable! Was he giving the cat a message?
Thanks so much for the review and the chuckle.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from RodG
A delightful story. It's easy to visualize this scenario, especially after we realize it's a young boy and his dog playing Sheriff vs. Outlaw in the Old West. You had me chuckling. Rod
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2024
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A delightful story. It's easy to visualize this scenario, especially after we realize it's a young boy and his dog playing Sheriff vs. Outlaw in the Old West. You had me chuckling. Rod
Comment Written 19-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2024
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thanks so much Rod. That was the whole point of the s tory. I just wanted to put a smile on someone's face and make their day a little better. Glad it was you!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Debbie Pope
This is just adorable. I particularly like your last two lines. That's where the cuteness comes in. I think that I would have given the sheriff a name though.You could do that without spoiling the ending and maybe add a few descriptive words .
You have a winner here. Hope you are eligible. I don't understand the descriptive line.
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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2024
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This is just adorable. I particularly like your last two lines. That's where the cuteness comes in. I think that I would have given the sheriff a name though.You could do that without spoiling the ending and maybe add a few descriptive words .
You have a winner here. Hope you are eligible. I don't understand the descriptive line.
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Comment Written 19-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2024
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I couldn't enter the contest because I had won this month already...so I wrote it and posted it anyway....still sticking to the rules of fifty words... though technically I could add more.
smiles, Carol
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
LOL Sooooo cute! I have the adorable image planted firmly in my head from your words. A very good job on a fifty word flash and a shame it couldn't be entered in the contest.
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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2024
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LOL Sooooo cute! I have the adorable image planted firmly in my head from your words. A very good job on a fifty word flash and a shame it couldn't be entered in the contest.
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Comment Written 19-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2024
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I hate that when I see a prompt and get an idea then find out I can't enter...Oh well! Here it is and thank you for reading,
Smiles and hugs, Carol