Another Wild Night
Youth getting wild.64 total reviews
Comment from astyanax
I like it, just a simple story that rhymes. I am like that too. I don't think I am good either but believe we all have a poet within us and trying is all we can do.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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I like it, just a simple story that rhymes. I am like that too. I don't think I am good either but believe we all have a poet within us and trying is all we can do.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Yes, astyanax you are so right. Thank you for your review. I really appreciate that!
Comment from kiwisteveh
Sounds a bit like something out of my teenage years more than 50 years ago. Are you sure this accurately represents 2024?
Anyway, it's a carefree, guy's gonna get drunk AND lucky poem with a casual swing to it and the hint of a couple of familiar song lyrics to boot.
Steve
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Sounds a bit like something out of my teenage years more than 50 years ago. Are you sure this accurately represents 2024?
Anyway, it's a carefree, guy's gonna get drunk AND lucky poem with a casual swing to it and the hint of a couple of familiar song lyrics to boot.
Steve
Comment Written 25-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Yes, Steve. I wrote this some time in the 80's and just now presented it lol! So, we have all been here at least once. Thank You for your review. I really appreciate that!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Those wild Saturday nights are in the past now as I enjoy a more peaceful lifestyle, but you brought the wild and vibrant Saturday night to life here Harry, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Those wild Saturday nights are in the past now as I enjoy a more peaceful lifestyle, but you brought the wild and vibrant Saturday night to life here Harry, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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LOL! Well, thank you Dolly! Yes, I wrote this in the 80's and just now presented it. I think we have all been here once, but now life is more peaceful! Thank you for your review. I really appreciate that!
Comment from DeboraDyess
If you, as this teen, were like my teen grandsons, her charm isn't all you were hoping she'd expose. lol
You capture so much of a wild Saturday night for a kid in that age group. I never quite thought of it from the guy's perspective, but you gave it to me quite well. I think I liked the waitress's flirtatious wink the best. :)
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings,
Deb
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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If you, as this teen, were like my teen grandsons, her charm isn't all you were hoping she'd expose. lol
You capture so much of a wild Saturday night for a kid in that age group. I never quite thought of it from the guy's perspective, but you gave it to me quite well. I think I liked the waitress's flirtatious wink the best. :)
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings,
Deb
Comment Written 24-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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LOL! Well, thank you Debora. I really appreciate your review!
Comment from Douglas Goff
It seems like someone got lucky that night!
Great poem with a fun flowy feel to it. Interesting theme. The one nighter!
Great piece of work, Harry!
D
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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It seems like someone got lucky that night!
Great poem with a fun flowy feel to it. Interesting theme. The one nighter!
Great piece of work, Harry!
D
Comment Written 24-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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LOL! Well, thank you Douglas! I really appreciate your review!
Comment from LJbutterfly
I enjoyed reading your story in a poem of uneven rhymes, that tells the story of the joy of being young and wild. It reminded me of my disco days. I didn't do much drinking, but I did dance, dance, dance, from one song to the next, never resting in between. Your picture paired perfectly with your poem, intensifying your message.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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I enjoyed reading your story in a poem of uneven rhymes, that tells the story of the joy of being young and wild. It reminded me of my disco days. I didn't do much drinking, but I did dance, dance, dance, from one song to the next, never resting in between. Your picture paired perfectly with your poem, intensifying your message.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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LOL! Well, thank you LJbutterfly. I actually wrote this in the late 70's during disco and just now presented it. So, you were right on cue! I really appreciate your review!
Comment from rspoet
Hello Harry,
Sounds like some good sing lyrics about those wild Saturday
nights parties. It's got excellent flow and some nice mixed rhymes.
I'm sure some will relate, others will say, "not me."
But it's a fun write.
Best wishes.
Robert
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Hello Harry,
Sounds like some good sing lyrics about those wild Saturday
nights parties. It's got excellent flow and some nice mixed rhymes.
I'm sure some will relate, others will say, "not me."
But it's a fun write.
Best wishes.
Robert
Comment Written 24-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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LOL! Yes, Robert some have related, some not. But this was written in the late 70's and just now presented. I really appreciate your review!
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
This piece has a vivid and engaging atmosphere, capturing the energy and mixed emotions of a lively Saturday night. The imagery of the loud music, the foggy mind, and the interactions with the waitress create a strong sense of place and mood. The repetition of "Saturday night" effectively emphasizes the significance of the moment and the contrasting feelings of uncertainty and excitement. The flow and rhythm fit well with the theme, and the ending leaves a promising sense of anticipation. Overall, it's a fun and immersive read that conveys the highs and lows of a night out with a personal touch.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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This piece has a vivid and engaging atmosphere, capturing the energy and mixed emotions of a lively Saturday night. The imagery of the loud music, the foggy mind, and the interactions with the waitress create a strong sense of place and mood. The repetition of "Saturday night" effectively emphasizes the significance of the moment and the contrasting feelings of uncertainty and excitement. The flow and rhythm fit well with the theme, and the ending leaves a promising sense of anticipation. Overall, it's a fun and immersive read that conveys the highs and lows of a night out with a personal touch.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Wow! Patty, you hit the nail on the head. No one gave me a review like yours. And that is just what I meant to convey. This was written in the late 70's and just now presented. Thank you for your review. I really appreciate that!
Comment from tempeste
Ciao!,
Not even when I was young was I interested in Saturday night outings and hoping for casual sex, even less.
I have always been a loner and a nerd.
That said, I did find your story had a nice flow and was a good read.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Ciao!,
Not even when I was young was I interested in Saturday night outings and hoping for casual sex, even less.
I have always been a loner and a nerd.
That said, I did find your story had a nice flow and was a good read.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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LOL! Well, thank you Tempeste. Well, this was actually written in the late 70's and just now presented. Well before AIDS and all those other things. I really appreciate your review.
Comment from jenintorre
I enjoyed reading this poem about a Saturday night. Your artwork is also very well chosen to fit the bill. It brought back memories.Your rhyming seemed a bit random but hey ho.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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I enjoyed reading this poem about a Saturday night. Your artwork is also very well chosen to fit the bill. It brought back memories.Your rhyming seemed a bit random but hey ho.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Well, thank you Jenintorre! I really appreciate your review!