Willing Hearts
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Comment from GWHARGIS
This was agood resting chapter. We are able to catch our breath and see the two main characters as people. They have their strengths and their weaknesses. Noah is still unsure about Sami and her feelings for him and Mateo. and Sami is still worried sick about all the girls involved in this. Great chapter. Gretchen
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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This was agood resting chapter. We are able to catch our breath and see the two main characters as people. They have their strengths and their weaknesses. Noah is still unsure about Sami and her feelings for him and Mateo. and Sami is still worried sick about all the girls involved in this. Great chapter. Gretchen
Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. I felt I needed to bring a little review in. LOL
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Barbara,
This chapter is a really good one; you've added more "description,"
The dialogue works well, and your whole presentation is exceptional.
Best wishes for health and happiness,
Cindy
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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Barbara,
This chapter is a really good one; you've added more "description,"
The dialogue works well, and your whole presentation is exceptional.
Best wishes for health and happiness,
Cindy
Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from nomi338
Obviously there are a lot of complicated issues to be dealt with. A lot of emotions to be taken into consideration, along with rules of conduct, official rules that must be observed and followed. Congratulations to you for keeping them straight and in order.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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Obviously there are a lot of complicated issues to be dealt with. A lot of emotions to be taken into consideration, along with rules of conduct, official rules that must be observed and followed. Congratulations to you for keeping them straight and in order.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from BethShelby
It is interesting how everyone keep worrying about how Mateo's dating on of the one might be affecting Sami. She is the one who suggested using him to do that. I guess the fact she isn't jealous proves she's really not interested in who he sees. It should make Noah feel better.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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It is interesting how everyone keep worrying about how Mateo's dating on of the one might be affecting Sami. She is the one who suggested using him to do that. I guess the fact she isn't jealous proves she's really not interested in who he sees. It should make Noah feel better.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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I think Noah's beginning to believe it. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Begin Again
We seem t be building a little more trust and less tension between Sami and Noah. That's good. But it doesn't look like they are much closer to solving this thing -- at least not yet. Good job!
smiles, Carol
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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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We seem t be building a little more trust and less tension between Sami and Noah. That's good. But it doesn't look like they are much closer to solving this thing -- at least not yet. Good job!
smiles, Carol
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Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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The next few posts will show progress on solving this problem. Thank you for the kind reivew.
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Our Cowboy is closing in on the bad guys over this direction too! Smiles!
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I know he is.
Comment from Lindsey Russell
I love this story. Are all of the chapters posted ? I'm really excited to see what happens. Thanks for sharing. Happy writing. Best wishes to you!!
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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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I love this story. Are all of the chapters posted ? I'm really excited to see what happens. Thanks for sharing. Happy writing. Best wishes to you!!
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Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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All the previous chapters are posted. The story is complete but I haven't posted it all yet.