Moody
A rhyming poem written for fun37 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
That's a the great thing about poetry - it's a creative form of release. I like the "diamonds into coal" - although I've read that unlike the Superman movie, the coal can't become diamonds. Good us consonance and internal rhyme!
reply by the author on 12-May-2024
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That's a the great thing about poetry - it's a creative form of release. I like the "diamonds into coal" - although I've read that unlike the Superman movie, the coal can't become diamonds. Good us consonance and internal rhyme!
Comment Written 12-May-2024
reply by the author on 12-May-2024
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Thanks, Helen, for the positive feedback.
I appreciate your outlook on the mechanics of the poem. That means a lot to me.
Thank you for choosing your favorite line.
It seems to be everybody's favorite so far, anyway.
Have a nice day.
Jesse
Comment from Dawn Munro
Oh, I enjoyed this one immensely -- what fun! And the internal rhyme is excellent, my friend, as is the end rhyme and meter. But my favorite line? "...Turning diamonds to coal"
reply by the author on 12-May-2024
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Oh, I enjoyed this one immensely -- what fun! And the internal rhyme is excellent, my friend, as is the end rhyme and meter. But my favorite line? "...Turning diamonds to coal"
Comment Written 12-May-2024
reply by the author on 12-May-2024
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I'm glad you can laugh at the way I intended this to come across. I appreciate your joy at the fun I was having. And thanks for choosing your favorite line.
What you say means a lot to me.
Jesse
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What a lovely compliment -- thank you. It was a pleasure, Jesse!
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You're welcome, Dawn.
Comment from marthag1
This is exceptional- the way you describe a state of known recklessness is very creative and you deliver very clearly the state of mind of this pieces subject- almost like a poem written by a rock and roll icon
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This is exceptional- the way you describe a state of known recklessness is very creative and you deliver very clearly the state of mind of this pieces subject- almost like a poem written by a rock and roll icon
Comment Written 12-May-2024
reply by the author on 12-May-2024
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Wow, that is a high compliment! A rock and roll icon, huh? Maybe I missed my calling, smile. Thank you for this positive feedback.
Enjoy the rest of the day.
Jesse
Comment from QC Poet
I really liked the line " turning diamonds to coal" been accused of being a bit of a grump myself at times but have told my now grown sons that I was cancelling Christmas for years they now tell my grandkids pappa cancelled it years ago LOL , Thanks for sharing your poem posting
reply by the author on 12-May-2024
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I really liked the line " turning diamonds to coal" been accused of being a bit of a grump myself at times but have told my now grown sons that I was cancelling Christmas for years they now tell my grandkids pappa cancelled it years ago LOL , Thanks for sharing your poem posting
Comment Written 12-May-2024
reply by the author on 12-May-2024
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Thank you for understanding the grumpy side of me. I admit it I laugh to myself when I think of my current mental health.
I appreciate you choosing your favorite line.
Have a nice day.
Jesse
Comment from Nicki.B
This is written well, short and snappy but such a string message. I think we all at one time or another or eight now has somebody like that in our lives. I was nodding going this is written for this person I know to a T!!!! Thanks for sharing I enjoyed it
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This is written well, short and snappy but such a string message. I think we all at one time or another or eight now has somebody like that in our lives. I was nodding going this is written for this person I know to a T!!!! Thanks for sharing I enjoyed it
Comment Written 12-May-2024
reply by the author on 12-May-2024
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Thank you for understanding the notion that it is healthy to laugh at oneself. I was afraid the readers wouldn't 'get' it but you have and I appreciate it.
I am glad you enjoyed it.
Jesse
Comment from Pamusart
Hi, Jesse. Remember me? I've been away for four and a half years
I liked your poem and it DOES evoke mental illness in my mind particurly bi polar. We've discussed this before. We share mental illness. I am bi polar
That last line was a zinger. The illness won
Thank you for sharing
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reply by the author on 12-May-2024
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Hi, Jesse. Remember me? I've been away for four and a half years
I liked your poem and it DOES evoke mental illness in my mind particurly bi polar. We've discussed this before. We share mental illness. I am bi polar
That last line was a zinger. The illness won
Thank you for sharing
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Comment Written 12-May-2024
reply by the author on 12-May-2024
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Hello Pam.
I remember you! Yes, we are both bipolar.
I am glad you caught the meaning behind the words. I hope you enjoyed it. It was meant to be a fun poem.
I hope you are doing well.
Take care, my friend.
Jesse
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Fun poem but serious subject. Take care
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I enjoyed reading this poem. I thought it was about our two presidential candidates. It fits both perfectly. Enough politics. This is a wonderfully written poem and I continue to pray for you.
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reply by the author on 12-May-2024
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I enjoyed reading this poem. I thought it was about our two presidential candidates. It fits both perfectly. Enough politics. This is a wonderfully written poem and I continue to pray for you.
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Comment Written 12-May-2024
reply by the author on 12-May-2024
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I avoid writing political posts. Too much mumbo jumbo to go around.
I am glad you enjoyed reading this.
Thanks for your continued prayers.
Jesse