Feeding the Ducks
A Lyle and Rufus tale.34 total reviews
Comment from Ric Myworld
Well, sweet lady, now you've gone and give me some characters that I can relate to. Like my old characters Marv and Levi that I wrote about a few years ago. And, they talk about like I do when I'm not having to spruce it up about around strangers. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
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Well, sweet lady, now you've gone and give me some characters that I can relate to. Like my old characters Marv and Levi that I wrote about a few years ago. And, they talk about like I do when I'm not having to spruce it up about around strangers. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
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Thank you Ric, I can relax into that kind of language too. I grew up around it. LOL I never met Mary and Llvi. They must have been around before I met you. You need to bring them back. I really appreciate the six stars.
Comment from Begin Again
Adorable! Those old men got it all figured out sitting on the park mention for twelve years feeding the ducks. The ducks probably think their family too. A good one!
Smiles, Cichella
Just a note:
to death to death if we didn't feed em.
back the when the
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024
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Adorable! Those old men got it all figured out sitting on the park mention for twelve years feeding the ducks. The ducks probably think their family too. A good one!
Smiles, Cichella
Just a note:
to death to death if we didn't feed em.
back the when the
Comment Written 19-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024
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Thank you Carol. I really appreciate the review and comment. I feel like I know these guys. LOL
Beth
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very delightful dialogue writing for the contest. I wish you the very best in the contest I enjoyed your verbal hillbilly talk. It was wonderful and I wish you the very best for the week and the weekend. Patricia .
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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2024
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This is a very delightful dialogue writing for the contest. I wish you the very best in the contest I enjoyed your verbal hillbilly talk. It was wonderful and I wish you the very best for the week and the weekend. Patricia .
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Comment Written 19-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2024
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Thank you Patricia. I'm glad you liked my dialogue only story with Rufus and Lyle. I enjoyed you comments.
Beth
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Very well done. The dialect feels very natural, yet cleaned up enough to be intelligible. Good work.
Groceries ARE too high. I just wish people would blame the real guilty ones - the producers who used Covid as an excuse to make more profit. They get richer while at the same time make poor people mad enough to punish Joe Biden. (sorry for my rant.)
Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024
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Very well done. The dialect feels very natural, yet cleaned up enough to be intelligible. Good work.
Groceries ARE too high. I just wish people would blame the real guilty ones - the producers who used Covid as an excuse to make more profit. They get richer while at the same time make poor people mad enough to punish Joe Biden. (sorry for my rant.)
Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 19-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024
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Thank you Wayne. It is okay to rant. If we can't do anything about it we need to get it out of our system. I've been around people who talk like Lyle and Rufus so when I saw the picture, I sort of adopted them. They do my ranting.
Beth