Old Roy
He had it coming43 total reviews
Comment from Daylily
A very funny limerick. This is something that might possibly have actually happened somewhere. It gives a new definition to All in the Family.
Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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A very funny limerick. This is something that might possibly have actually happened somewhere. It gives a new definition to All in the Family.
Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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Haha! Right!? thanks so much!
Xo
Comment from John Ciarmello
This is a cute piece. I guess old Roy wasn't fooling anyone, as the genes will surely tell the truth in most cases without a DNA test. Lol.
An enjoyable read! Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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This is a cute piece. I guess old Roy wasn't fooling anyone, as the genes will surely tell the truth in most cases without a DNA test. Lol.
An enjoyable read! Best, JohnC
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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Haha, thanks so much, John!
Xo
Comment from QC Poet
A case of when the man's away the wife will play no matter what the blood test says both brothers share the same DNA great limerick good Luck to you in the contest
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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A case of when the man's away the wife will play no matter what the blood test says both brothers share the same DNA great limerick good Luck to you in the contest
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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Haha, thanks so much!
Xo
Comment from tempeste
Ciao!.
as I was reading the third line, I knew where you were going.
Ouch that will hurt old Roy.
I believe there is a saying in English that sums up this mess:
what goes around, comes around or
Karma's bitch.
This a fine entry for this contest even if the topic is unpleasant.
poor kid, he will be the one suffering most.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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Ciao!.
as I was reading the third line, I knew where you were going.
Ouch that will hurt old Roy.
I believe there is a saying in English that sums up this mess:
what goes around, comes around or
Karma's bitch.
This a fine entry for this contest even if the topic is unpleasant.
poor kid, he will be the one suffering most.
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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This is true, thanks so much!
Xo
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You are welcome ! 🍀
Comment from Brenda Strauser
I really enjoyed this. It is so fummy. Clever idea. Roy surely deserves
this. I know this is a joke, but I know of someone like this. Well written. Great job
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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I really enjoyed this. It is so fummy. Clever idea. Roy surely deserves
this. I know this is a joke, but I know of someone like this. Well written. Great job
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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Brenda, thanks so much!
Xo
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi
This is a fittingly sarcastic poem. Happy in the birth of a child. But sad in that it is into a poor marriage. Well, maybe the baby looks like his brother because it is just a family resemblance and not the affair that is implied.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest.
Have a great day and rest of the week.
Joan
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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Hi
This is a fittingly sarcastic poem. Happy in the birth of a child. But sad in that it is into a poor marriage. Well, maybe the baby looks like his brother because it is just a family resemblance and not the affair that is implied.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest.
Have a great day and rest of the week.
Joan
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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Haha, thanks so much!
Xo
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Don't mention it.
Joan
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Lol, that was hilarious!! I think this one could be a winner. This limerick is spot on for the rhyme and the words are perfect. Well done and good luck! :) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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Lol, that was hilarious!! I think this one could be a winner. This limerick is spot on for the rhyme and the words are perfect. Well done and good luck! :) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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Sandra, thanks so much!
Xo
Comment from Boogienights
This is funny! One of the better ones l've read and there are a lot of good ones. The rhyming is on point and the subject matter hilarious. Great entry, best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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This is funny! One of the better ones l've read and there are a lot of good ones. The rhyming is on point and the subject matter hilarious. Great entry, best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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Thanks so much!
Xo
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, this is inventive, well rhymed and metered and hilarious, this is a winner for me, one of the best Limericks I have read on Fanstory, you hit to spot for me with this one, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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Ha ha ha, this is inventive, well rhymed and metered and hilarious, this is a winner for me, one of the best Limericks I have read on Fanstory, you hit to spot for me with this one, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 28-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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Dolly, that means the world to me!! Thank you so much!
Xo
Comment from Julie Helms
Yep, genetics are a funny thing, always giving away the secret! Fun limerick for the contest with a cute accompanying picture of the evidence. Best of luck! Julie.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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Yep, genetics are a funny thing, always giving away the secret! Fun limerick for the contest with a cute accompanying picture of the evidence. Best of luck! Julie.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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Haha, thank you so much, Julie!
Xo