Twas the Night Before Christmas
A young mans encounter with a woman evokes lost memories.32 total reviews
Comment from Ricky1024
Sorry to hear about your mother.
This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed Well with no Grammar Issues.
Good luck with this one and keep writing
Doctor Ricky 1024
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reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
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Sorry to hear about your mother.
This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed Well with no Grammar Issues.
Good luck with this one and keep writing
Doctor Ricky 1024
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Comment Written 11-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
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Thanks for the feedback.
Comment from Navada
Welcome to FanStory and congratulations on posting your first story! You've hit this one out of the park. I could definitely connect with your central theme - that in the midst of global and noisy celebrations, there is a lot of quiet mourning and loss happening behind the scenes. Great writing - I look forward to reading more of your work! :)
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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
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Welcome to FanStory and congratulations on posting your first story! You've hit this one out of the park. I could definitely connect with your central theme - that in the midst of global and noisy celebrations, there is a lot of quiet mourning and loss happening behind the scenes. Great writing - I look forward to reading more of your work! :)
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Comment Written 11-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
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Thank you for the feedback!