Comment from Brett Matthew West

Excellent

Hand-counted one hundred words, so meets that contest requirement.

Revenge is definitely sweet.

No cat fancier, but can not say the man did not get exactly what he deserved for hurting any animal for no reason.

Nice twist at the end that the protagonist is a cat, not a person as readers may believe at first.


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 Comment Written 03-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2023

Thank you. just a short story for the contest. I am a cat lover so something like this comes easy.

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

This is excellent work. Your presentation is very good. You use expressive words and colorful imagery that carry your short story and there's a surprise twist too! Clever!

Best wishes,

Alex



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 Comment Written 03-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2023

Thank you. It's just a short story that popped into my mind, so I thought it would work for this contest.