We Don't Know All But We Owe All
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Comment from shelley kaye
"We Don't Know All Bur We Owe All" <-- typo? did you mean BUT?
this was a great memorial poem for our fallen...
one suggestion i have if i may, is maybe try a black background and a yellow or orange font to blend with the cool pic? just a thought ;)
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
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reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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"We Don't Know All Bur We Owe All" <-- typo? did you mean BUT?
this was a great memorial poem for our fallen...
one suggestion i have if i may, is maybe try a black background and a yellow or orange font to blend with the cool pic? just a thought ;)
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
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Comment Written 16-May-2023
reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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Thank you very much Shelley. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.