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Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "She Climbs"NaPoWriMo April Poetry Contest
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Comment from Rebecca Roberts1
Your poem paints a wonderful picture and brings back some of my best memories of when my sisters and I kept our tree limbs polished by running up and down their broad limbs.
Great job.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2023
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Your poem paints a wonderful picture and brings back some of my best memories of when my sisters and I kept our tree limbs polished by running up and down their broad limbs.
Great job.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2023
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I love this, Rebecca- I have similar memories with my sisters. Some of my most cherished!
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Jessica
Comment from Wendy G
Very cleverly and skilfully written. This one had a meaningful theme flowing throughout. The image was a well chosen support. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2023
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Very cleverly and skilfully written. This one had a meaningful theme flowing throughout. The image was a well chosen support. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 11-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much, Wendy!!
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Jessica
Comment from jmdg1954
Ha. What a clever poem.
Trotting through the trees...
Climbs in curls...
Jumping, reaching branches...
Nicely done. Best of luck in the contest.
John
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2023
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Ha. What a clever poem.
Trotting through the trees...
Climbs in curls...
Jumping, reaching branches...
Nicely done. Best of luck in the contest.
John
Comment Written 11-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2023
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Thank you, John!! Truly appreciated!!
Comment from GWHARGIS
What a nice poem to read. I like it because it's about innocence intact. Little girls being little girls. As a former tree climber I could feel the thrill of the climb and the excitement of being eye level with birds. I really enjoyed this. Gretchen
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What a nice poem to read. I like it because it's about innocence intact. Little girls being little girls. As a former tree climber I could feel the thrill of the climb and the excitement of being eye level with birds. I really enjoyed this. Gretchen
Comment Written 11-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much, Gretchen! From one former tree climber to another!
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Jessica
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation.
-Your note is appreciated.
-The syllable count is good, along with the rhyme.
-The poem flows well from line to line and
paints a vivid word picture as they young
girl is enjoying climbing the tree and
"climbs in curls."
-I like the concluding line very much.
-A good entry; good luck!
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2023
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-Nice artwork and presentation.
-Your note is appreciated.
-The syllable count is good, along with the rhyme.
-The poem flows well from line to line and
paints a vivid word picture as they young
girl is enjoying climbing the tree and
"climbs in curls."
-I like the concluding line very much.
-A good entry; good luck!
Comment Written 11-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much, Pam! I appreciate your feedback!!
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You are very welcome, Jessica.
Comment from royowen
It does my heart good to see children clambering nimbly through the branches of the trees, they do so well, as if God put them there for that very purpose. He did, didn't He? Beautifully written in rhyming alliteration, good luck, my friend blessings Roy
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It does my heart good to see children clambering nimbly through the branches of the trees, they do so well, as if God put them there for that very purpose. He did, didn't He? Beautifully written in rhyming alliteration, good luck, my friend blessings Roy
Comment Written 11-Apr-2023
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Thank you, Roy!! Well said!
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Jessica
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Well done
Comment from Ginda Simpson
Great job with alliteration, flowing naturally with good rhyming theme. Yes, indeed, little girls just want to have fun and know how to achieve that.
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Great job with alliteration, flowing naturally with good rhyming theme. Yes, indeed, little girls just want to have fun and know how to achieve that.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2023
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Thank you, Ginda! I appreciate that!
Comment from lyenochka
You met this rhyming alliteration challenge well and created a lovely picture of children having fun in trees embracing life! Hope this does well in the contest!
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You met this rhyming alliteration challenge well and created a lovely picture of children having fun in trees embracing life! Hope this does well in the contest!
Comment Written 11-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much! I truly appreciate that!
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Jessica
Comment from Bill Schott
This seven x seven alliterative poem, She Climbs, has all the requirements of the challenge and brings back those wonderful years of innocent play and endless energy.
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This seven x seven alliterative poem, She Climbs, has all the requirements of the challenge and brings back those wonderful years of innocent play and endless energy.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2023
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Thank you, Bill!
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Girls can be tom boys. Your poem rhymes and brings out the feeling of springtime. When they climb trees and hang upside down like monkeys, they are children filled with energy.
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Girls can be tom boys. Your poem rhymes and brings out the feeling of springtime. When they climb trees and hang upside down like monkeys, they are children filled with energy.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much, I agree! Nothing better than natures jungle gym!
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Jessica